|Reviews for Falling|
| arjane chapter 1 . 10/29/2020
That was so in character and adorable! Love this two and you did such a great job writing them.
| LunaBianca chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
Sweet, in a good way. I likes.
It feels right that Ran Fan hasn't pondered whether she loves Ling romantically; she's so focused on caste and duty that it doesn't cross her mind.
This pairing doesn't get enough love! Thanks for writing.
| Slytherin Sadist Angel chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Beautiful little LingFan here. You captured both their characters extremely well. Great job!
| turtleducklings chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
This was beautiful and funny and adorable and so painfully in-character and I just. Please stop writing things so wonderfully?
| zgs1994 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
ooh sexy! and so in character! great job!
| KurenoxArisaxx chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Oh wow, I loved that. It was so descriptive; I cringed when it described their injuries . I loved the ending too Very awesome fic
| Violetlight chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Good fic, except for one thing. It makes no sense for Ling to be injured like that if Greed's still within him. Greed would have simply regenerated ... unless, of course, that was on purpose, and it wasn't actually *Ling* that Lan Fan was with.
On second thought, I like this fic. Greed, you sly bastard.
| LittleMissSophie chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
duh oh shiet. That was good. (Y) I love LingxLan Fan. It's just so cute! She was so squeemish about the whole thing too xD It's adorable.
| T420000 chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
cute I liked it.
| hierakion chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
I accidentally mistook the "And he grabbed her hand." for "And he grabbed her ass."
Oh brain, how terrible you are.
| unknown reviewer chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Just what does this have to do with Madame Christmas, though, one has to wonder...
| Ice's butterfly's chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
It is the best fanfic LingxLanfan I've read no doubt. I love his writing that makes it look so easy narrative and interesting C:
| Anana553 chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
i don't understant though :
why is is ling and madam christmas?
you are a great writer!
| Saphruikan chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
The only problem I have with this is that Lan Fan is 14 YEARS OLD!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
this is definately my favorite ling/lanfan fic of all time. the characterization is perfect, and its lighthearted without being disgustingly fluffy. also, i love all the little details.
so yeah, this is amazing. :) please write more ling/lanfan fics!