Reviews for Falling
dorcas chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
"Well, a lot of things came before Ling's sense of modesty."

That was awesome, if not confusing. You got really into Ranfan's point of view, and made it more about her than about him, which is fairly rare in fics these days. (Oh well; we can always hope for more in support once they come up in the anime.)
chickencherrycola chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
This deserves more happy reviews, so here.

Yay! Awesome job, awesome couple. Written well, fairly in-character. :)
Alyss Ashworth chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
This is an extremely well written story! I loved it :)
iryna chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
I love it! Nicely done! :D
Meso the Hanyu chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
This was amazing, at one point I was like "Wait, is it Ling or Greed?" but I worked it out, I luff LingxRanfan, my favorite couple ever, good job
tra-si-sille chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
This story was very good. I really enjoyed reading it. I was really impressed at how you managed to keep them both in character and add in humor too.

Also, it didnt drag. I've read a lot of stories which make me go 'Oh when's it going to hurry up and move on?' But this one didnt. It moved just fast enough so that I wasnt board and not so fast that it was like 'woah! what just happened?'

One thing I would like to say is that you should watch the use of commas. If a sentance makes sense without one then they shouldnt be used because it makes some sentances far to long.

Sorry for rambling Great story. Well done!
volepitofregret chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Awesome! This was really well-written and in-character, you really captured the essence of what makes Lingfan so sweet... and yet so funny. Just with little things like "She stared at him, unable to utter even an apology. For… being female. Or tingling. Scandalously."

I laughed so hard at just that. Tingling... scandalously.

You really nailed how I always thought Ranfan would be: it never even having occurred to her that loving him was an option because of social classes. The kiss was spontaneous and completely just Ling-ish in general...

I'm rambling. Anyway, great job!
Sakura Hitsugaya chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
well written. great job.

-Sakura Hitsugaya

bakechan chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
i'm really glad that somebody wrote a ling/ranfan fic! it was very well written, i enjoyed it very much!
marmaroth chapter 1 . 1/1/2009

I LOVE YOU FOR THIS! ...but not in a gay way (since I'm assuming you're a girl. Sorry if you're not).


animefallingstar chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Yay! This really made me smile. I love LingxRanFan, and there isn't enough well-written stuff out there. Very nicely written. Very fluffy!

Very... smile-y piece!
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