|Reviews for Invalid|
| Measured chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
I like the feel of this, the sort of smooth aspect that the not actual dialogue set aside. I'm not sure that could work in every setting but it worked well here.
I'm not big on Mai Lee personally but the idea of facts being Mai's religion is interesting. I can see her heaping scorn on Ty Lee and her superstitious ways.
Overall, nice use of the Japanese new year's festival!