Reviews for This wild abandoned star
Sak chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
You are poetic to a tee.
A 'T'
Amazing dialogue.
HardlyFatal chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
This is rather wonderful. Excellent job.
redchinese chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
i'm always a sucker at putting what i enjoy to words.

but this rocks- its sweet and sad, and kind of amazing
elenlith chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Let's just say that you made me love Orihime (and I usually hate her with a passion!). This is beautifully written, I really like this couple!
glasclach chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
That was beautifully written, with wonderful flow and development, particularly of the characters, and great word choice and sentence construction (which is an awfully dry way of saying that the writing itself is excellent). A wonderful Renji/Orihime story, and a fantastic story, period.
Voidrae chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
I don't understand why this doesn't have more reviews, but I'll add one.

I really loved this. The flow of your writing is mesmerizing, and the way it is woven together is beautiful. I would love to prattle on, but I can't really say more than that. Thank you for sharing this with the rest of us.
Sanded Silk chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Amazing story! I love how chaste you kept it. Relatively chaste, anyway. :D Dunno about you, but for me, explicit scenes somehow ruin it for all stories.

-Sanded Silk-
Tina Caps chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Wonderful story. Words are really deep and filled with so much emotions. I really felt this story and you made this pairing sounds so real and presentable. Every bit of it works... congratulations!
123 chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
cute and though sometimes I was confused it was well written. But why was it rated M? No blood, hardly found the sex...was there sex? O.O

I read more mature stuff in the T section.
der chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
insanely beautiful
RuKiAbabY chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
i'm not a renori shipper but i loved this. u make me believ. will u pls write a bk?
GirlyGirl68 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
i liked it a lot
UnluckyAmulet chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
Wow. I really, really enjoyed this. I've been meaning to read it for a while, but I kept somehow getting distracted. I am so glad I sat down and took my time with it, because I think that you've crafted something really beautiful here. Renji and Orihime were absolutely beautifully in character, which is partly why this was so realistic and entertaining. The emotional connection that forms between the two of them grows so naturally and you don't rush it, and I liked all the flower/plant allusions you were using (I always link Orihime with poppies, ever since Hueco Mundo.) The prose was so lyrical and pretty as well. I do think the scenes with solo Renji are a tad sluggish, and the sex scene was short and kind of vague, but it was nice to see both of their perspectives. The song lyrics for each sections were also really unusual, in a good way!

(This is a long review for me. Oh well.)

Keep up the good work!

Nayuki-Bunny chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
beautifully sweet. this pairing intrigues me, not to the point where I ship it, but so much so that I can temporarily stash away my IchiHime and RenRuki fandoms and sit and read this all the way through. the title actually was a turn-off for me (for its lack of capitalization), but your writing has proved itself several times over in the expanse of this fic. lovely work, keep it up!
Dracoqueen22 chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Wow, that was superb. Everything was spot-on, the characterization, the slowly revealed emotions, the pacing. Wonderful. I thought I was the only one who loved this pairing for the greatness it could be but it seems I am not alone. I loved it!

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