Reviews for Selfish Behavior
Guest chapter 5 . 3/8/2016
Awesome story!
Dear Guest chapter 5 . 11/20/2015
wooooaahhh, intense.
keen dre chapter 5 . 7/2/2015
NIGGA DAMN...don't get to bossy DAMN
kayla chapter 5 . 12/31/2014
Keep going with story its AMAZING so far
Guest chapter 5 . 5/11/2013
I think it was good more chapters please
Chickstar merline chapter 5 . 2/9/2013
W.o.w !
Guest chapter 5 . 7/8/2012
Defenatly my favourite spanking fic! Keep up the good work.

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fcat5761 chapter 5 . 8/11/2011
I really loved your Edward! Not too crazy about the whole family knowing about it, embarrassing much! Thanks for sharing, i throughly enjoyed it.
erika shoval chapter 5 . 7/3/2011
OMG! thank you! i love this story.
Edward's spouse chapter 5 . 6/29/2011
excellent.
cbzoo chapter 5 . 4/23/2011
good job
nkh1028 chapter 5 . 1/15/2011
I really really like this story! I wish you would have continued!

Thanks!
Amanda Cullen001 chapter 5 . 12/2/2010
You should really clarify what spanking means. Because when I saw spanking and lemons I thought "JACKPOT!" But this story wasn't at all what i thought it was going to be.

I don't care how you put it, that was pure abuse, both verbal and physical. When he got her so called 'mental consent' it was only because he made her THINK and TRUELY BELIEVE that she deserved a punishment like that. That was the verbal abuse, and stuff like that can really mess with your mind and make you have low self esteem. I think its obvious what the physical abuse was.

When I started reading this story I thought it was just going to be like he gets mad at her for what she did, they go to his house and fight about it for a while, then have some make-up sex and somewhere in the sex he would spank her. But as you can see, that's not at all what happened.
waitforme2 chapter 5 . 11/13/2010
Loved your story and loved your Darkward! I want one. ;)

Look forward to reading more of your writing.
Oona4 chapter 5 . 9/28/2010
WOW! What a cool story, I love Edward like this. He should have spanked her on their way back from the "vote" in the original book. SM takes away his masculine self, always thought he should be sexier. Good job. Can't wait to see where we go next!
Sherry80 chapter 5 . 7/19/2010
oh so love a take charge Edward good story
moonhoney2 chapter 5 . 6/29/2010
This story was well written. However, while i have no problem with dom/sub, bdsm play or even choosing to live the lifestyle (I find it pretty hot actually), the way it's portrayed in this story infuriates me. The conversation and "revelations" she has in the first 2 chapter only prove that she is weak, ignorant, has zero self esteem and self confidence, and is the typical victim in an abusive relationship. That is what is depicted here. An abusive relationship. There was no indication that this arrangement was agreed upon in the past, so I can only assume it was a surprise to her. No boundaries were set. No safe words. No respect is given to her. She is not a person or an equal partner in this relationship. She is but a pile of clay that Edward molds to be what he wants her to be, instead of her being her own person.

From what I understand about true, healthy dom/sub relationships, the one described here is anything but. Because of that, this story kinda ticks me off because it can give people the wrong impression of that lifestyle. If this story was the first "insight" they were to have into this world, they wouldn't leave with a good impression. To label this story as a Dom/Sub story is an insult to that community as it gives them a bad name. It should be labeled under abuse instead.
OPOSOJOJ chapter 5 . 6/21/2010
That was not bad.
tiffyboocullenjonas chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
wow that was great loved it
BellaCullenMad chapter 5 . 4/5/2010
good story :)
CRAZYCARE4 chapter 5 . 3/19/2010
Gah do I love domward, sexy as hell and very commanding. Loved the story.
HmmreallyenjoyHP chapter 5 . 2/17/2010
I like that Bella realized she liked having Edward in control because she was finally able to give up feeling responsible for everything. With her history this makes sense. Great story.
flyrbrd chapter 5 . 2/7/2010
Thanks I really love this story.
invisible-to-all chapter 5 . 12/31/2009
If that was my boyfriend i would have dumped

Him the minitue theword

I own you came out of his

Mouth
TwilightGuru09 chapter 5 . 12/22/2009
ah very sweet. Bella needs a dominant. I like this new Edward.
justginger chapter 5 . 12/12/2009
LOVED THIS STORY
hockeymom4 chapter 5 . 12/3/2009
Liked it, and wished you'd write a sequel
Stargirl888 chapter 5 . 11/29/2009
i enjoyed this story but am not so sure about the whole "I own you" thing. I think it would be nice if Alice and Bella had a conversation about all that happened and how her relationship with Edward has changed. Just a suggestion.
Wendy55 chapter 5 . 9/26/2009
I'm not too crazy about the whole 'submissive' deal... it's a bit sexist. (by that i mean more than a bit)
wandamarie chapter 5 . 9/9/2009
wow it was a good chapter thanks cant want for the next chapter thanks
pdd912 chapter 5 . 8/27/2009
Nice story. I love Edward-spanking-Bella stories. Honestly, I don't think it's ooc at all. Or maybe that's just wishful thinking. But when I read Twilight, I could totally see Edward turning Bella over his knee and giving her a good spanking.

If you like stories with Edward spanking Bella, you should check out the one I wrote. It's called Into the Grey House.

Pam
Edwella Bellward chapter 5 . 8/25/2009
OMG this story is absolutely perfect. I'm surprised with how much actually. The whole time I was reading I was thinking this is insane. But it actually is very appropriate as you mentioned Edward came from a time when men pretty much owned their wives. They were responsible for them in every way including discipline. And most of the other Cullens I could see them feeling such actions were necessary as well...

It's funny to think that not so long ago this attitude was considered completely the norm. I can see it in the way my parents act toward each other. Father's word is law, no questions asked.(D/s aspects aside of course)

However I finding myself very drawn to the D/s side of Edward and Bella's relationship. And you are definitely going on my author alerts. I can't wait to see what other stories you come up with.
PandoraPlagues chapter 5 . 8/22/2009
Lawls.

Edward was a bitch in this one :o.

Oh well i liked it good job :)
fefee chapter 5 . 8/5/2009
*sigh*

i loved it...

please write more!
ConfusionPixie chapter 5 . 7/17/2009
im not sure if i like dom/sub stuff... it was an interesting story but... maybe its just me cause i would never do that.
morganpetrovapendragon chapter 5 . 7/15/2009
keep reading
StrangeChild96 chapter 5 . 7/5/2009
Wow, this is really awesome. I love dominant edward ~sexy smile~ Anyways I hope you write for this is very good. I just can't get over how much i love dominant edward. You did an AMAZIng job on this story and I hope to read more of it. Can't wait.

-Kitty
MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams chapter 5 . 7/1/2009
no offense or anything that was a little disturbing but i liked it. minus the fact edward is OC
twilightluver0220 chapter 5 . 6/26/2009
i like this story because u would never expect this type of behavior in the books. good job! i luved it, it made me feel a lot of different things! happy, sad, angry, embareassed. keep on writting!
twilight1alice chapter 5 . 5/27/2009
that was a good story
xoSmiley4Lifexo chapter 5 . 5/24/2009
that was...

different.
dfgwe chapter 5 . 5/19/2009
nice
Walker77 chapter 5 . 5/8/2009
good story!

was that the end, or did you say you were writing more?

would love to read more :)
BringOnTheShackles chapter 5 . 4/20/2009
Loved that!
RedLocker chapter 5 . 4/7/2009
wow didn't see that coming. good chapter though, like to see what else you got up your sleeve.
iluvjbfromtwilight chapter 5 . 3/28/2009
aw but they still didnt have actucall intercourse

Edward needs a little something too
RavenCullenBabee chapter 5 . 3/13/2009
..o.0

hehe;;
Dreams Of Naughtiness chapter 5 . 3/8/2009
That was wonderful . . . i am in love with your Edward :)
sailboatsnbeaches chapter 5 . 3/4/2009
This is a great story
eeelleira chapter 5 . 2/17/2009
I LOVED IT! please write more stories like these!
ashley.ilub chapter 5 . 2/15/2009
unlike most stories of Edward being dominant this one is very differant. This kind of brings out the natural Twilight feel, I know most of the girls who read it see Edward as kinda and accepting and well perfect, but honestly ive always foccused on the way hes so possessive of Bella like she was his posesion Hes always seemed so conrolling to me and this just brings that out in a bit of a darker theme.
skittles09 chapter 5 . 2/13/2009
please dont bash the story just b/c it's not your cup of tea. some of us enjoy an alternative universe so to speak & this is exactly how we like our Edward.
AemryAvalon chapter 5 . 2/10/2009
I love this story! Please tell me you plan to continue it, or make it a series. I love Edward as a dominate. And I love seeing Bella get paddled. Please write more. Also, I would like to offer my services as a second Beta. There are still many spelling and grammer mistakes that are being missed. Please let me know. Thanks for a great story!
HangTogetherOrHangSeperate chapter 5 . 2/8/2009
i LOVE it! please do more spanking fics soon!
Bite-Me-Twilight-496 chapter 5 . 2/6/2009
oh wow! that was good! please write more stories like this! good
kono yona usotsuki chapter 5 . 2/3/2009
The story was awesome.. it made me lmao in sum places wen he asked her nt to cum. i loved it. keep it up oh n next tym take it easy on poor bella?
rmcrms5 chapter 5 . 2/2/2009
holy freaking cow! that was hot hot hot!
lnlune chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
That was great, thanks so much for sharing.
MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
omg this story is soo good please write more i wish edward was more like this in the books not all i just want you to be happy and stuff please write more stories like this
ElizabethDawn chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
I was so excited to see that this story had an update! Awesome chapter! I love Bella's thoughts throughout. Update soon!
TwihardSie chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
that was a really good story :)
twilight-fedishfreak chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
oh ya...i cnt WAIT for the rest , poor bella man...we should switch places...i dont think she deserves this...uh , horrible um...punishment...ya ya i think i should take over it for her...
ALEXXsugar chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
Haha. I love the dominate Edward. Haha. Please update soon.
Mistress of Words39 chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
*choked* oh...my...god...so good...write something else! it was so fucking good...oh my god...shit...i loved it...write more...it doesn't matter...new story...more of this one...whatever...
octoberland chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
I love this story SO much. More please!
IMCullen chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
Im sad this story is comin to an end soo soon. :( well i look forward to what you write next.
EmmettsGirlfriend chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
Perfect ending! I loved i really can't wait to hear more of your stories!
margaritama chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
Well, that was slightly yummy. Hey one doesn't know how one will behave in real life. She's human and feeling his power, the most unexpected people are subs...I do like how you threw in Edward's time period. That is always forgotten. So is this the end?
Edwardgirl08 chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
I wish there were more dominant Edward stories like this.
yankeerose chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
This entire story can be summed up with one word..."YUMMY". Thanks for sharing it with us.
Tainted Grace chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
i love this story so much, i love dominant edward please update soon more i cant wait to see bella slip xD gr PLEASE COME BACK SOON!
mspacman1 chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
That was a good chapter!