| Reviews for Ascension of the Kitsune |
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   Framework chapter 1 . 9/8 Why did you even bother with mixing languages? It just makes it hard to understand and annoying. |
| Coffeezombi chapter 8 . 8/31 *leans back on my couch* Very emotional chapter...nice |
| Monster King chapter 31 . 8/25 Great story. |
| Pillowism chapter 1 . 7/23 God, I couldn’t push through this story. The awkwardness of the constant japanese is so fucking annoying to read through. Not only that, you don’t even know basic literary devices like a comma! Can you even use punctuation? Also the rape scene was pointless. Garbage. |
| Thallion chapter 28 . 7/17 Naruto used Mach Punch! It's Super Effective! Manda has fainted! Please send out your next Pokemon! |
| Thallion chapter 28 . 7/17 Manda used Poison Sting! Manda's attack missed! |
| Thallion chapter 24 . 7/16 doesn't orochimaru's jutsu leave behind a 'corpse' with damage? couldn't one or two have been used since he can use it between 4 &10 times, based on certain factors? |
| Thallion chapter 12 . 7/14 why doesn't zabuza recognize Naruto? He trained the kid for a year! |
| Thallion chapter 11 . 7/14 wasn't Naruto two when Kakashi used that Genjutsu? |
| Saurito chapter 11 . 7/10 Oh wow, a harem, oh wow, a half decent story turned to shit |
| Fgougeon chapter 4 . 7/10 off course naruto has fox ears like every other fanfiction were he is trained by kurama this story is now trash |
| arsalan.rex chapter 2 . 7/2 wait.. I thought it was Kushina; an uzamaki who taught minato the art of sealing and not the other way round. |
| OneTwoThreeReactors chapter 2 . 6/6 Kushina... You fucking bitch... You will die slowly... HOPEFULLY. |
| ZeroQi chapter 4 . 5/27 Yeesh, this story is bad. |
| Issy786 chapter 24 . 5/7 die u fucking cunt u made this story bull shit I would cut her fucking head off |