My review can only say 2/5.

great story more please

Esto esta lleno de clichés y encima, mal echos. Seriamente, es como si hubiera cogido todo lo malo y odioso y hubiera formado un fanfic. Pero, como sea. Igualmente hay gente que les gusta este tipo de basura, con un historia alterada sin sentido, cambios de carácter de personajes exagerados, niveles de poder del badass revienta ovarios del clásico naruto mitad demonio, siempre con su zorra de nueve colas tras su culo.

Resumiendo, fanfic basura para lectores basura.
Si sos un tipo inteligente, te aplaudire mentalmente si aguantas los 10 primeros capítulos sin nombrar cada antepasado del que hizo esto con el mayor respeto que puedes reunir al estar completamente asqueado, irritado.. Etc.

good job the author changed a good story into a shitty one in a single chapter fuck you man FUCK YOU

cvsfffffbbbrczth be changed to htrtwyre yeah I biko ijyvf to yourself IN

it seems like you like picking on hana

I just wanted to ask that even though you say queen of demons in your AU, kyuubi 'herself ' refered to as the Lord of Demons. And while Naruto refers to kyuubi as '-sensei', in his internal monologue it is 'it'. Why respect on the face and objectification in mind? And how come Kyuubi has the knowledge of shinobi arts? Can it take the form of humans or is simply has it? There was no explanation to this. While the behaviour of the Kyuubi is confusing towards Naruto, hopefully there will be an explanation for it...rather than transferred respect by form of association in it.

I hope I did not offend.
Happy writing:) ~~

I'm really enjoying what you've written so far.

i jus read female kyuubi and harem and i was put off. if u have a goog plot you wouldn't need the most outlandish troupes. anyways all the best with the fic

Are you dumb you idiot cause I think you are I why would someone just forgive the person that lied to you you dumb fuck I mean why! Would someone come back to the place that treated you like a demon and protect it and seoriosly! Nigga the kyubbi hates naruto and naruto don't get me started on my motherfucker he has no fashion sense rogue sasuke looks cooler this idiot and I hate sasuke he is an idiot and you are dumb you are not human my nigga someone just doesn't easily forgive someone ok you have no human sense

Shitfic.

I can already see this fic is going in the bullshit "redemption"/"forgiveness" route.

So yeah - fuck this bullshit fic.

I know that any parent can and some even do loathe their child to that point, hell, Kushina isn't even as bad as some who would actually kill their own children, at least she couldn't bring herself to do that. However that doesn't make her any less of a garbage parent.

Pretty sure Naruto had his whisker marks before he even became a Jinchuuriki, probably because of the exposure to the chakra while he was in the womb.

as soon as the word sexy came in the confession the bubble of euphoria popped and deflated of the moment

I know this a fan fiction and all but I really don't see why everyone insists on making minato and kushina out to be monsters when they sacrificed there lives to protect naruto and the village and I'm kinda sick of the hole mobs beating thing people do with naruto childhood the only thing those villagers ever did was ignore and whisper hateful remarks behind his back that's it it's not like they fucking crucified him