|Reviews for Surprising Alice|
| Miranda chapter 3 . 7/21
| Kat chapter 3 . 3/31/2014
*Thumbs up* Well done
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/4/2014
Please make them fuck rough, everyone writes about them making love.
| fuzzypants chapter 3 . 6/13/2013
have jasper be the master and alice be the sex slave so jasper can have his revenge on alice
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/16/2013
Soon, I would be ready for round two. Or was it three? Hell, who's counting?
Poor Edward probably is.
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/1/2012
| Josiecupcake chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
I love these stories and love. :]
| Sarah v chapter 3 . 6/16/2012
I love that you write Alice and jasper in a passionate way, since rarely people see them this way only emmet and Rosalie. This is very hot without being vulgar ;)
| Wendy chapter 3 . 12/18/2011
IMO,it would be better if it was a mix of both.
| Jazzymaniac chapter 3 . 12/8/2011
Hehe jazzy Ali love!
| littlemisslovelygood chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
its funny how since vampires dont have blood they cant have erections..
| rocklesson86 chapter 3 . 9/27/2011
Please update your story soon. I say they should fuck.
| Anonymous chapter 3 . 3/31/2011
Make love, definitely. But I want Alice to be in
A moderate amount of pain and jasper to do
That whole thing where he would feel terrible
For doing that to her even though she loved
It, like Edward and Bella
| bellacullenmccartywhitlock chapter 3 . 12/31/2010
Update soon please :)
| DracosDerpyHoof chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
Is it wrong that I find this story funny and cute?
Once again, A wonderful writer with great potential here. I don't see why everyone says everyone is 'Grammar Illiterate'
I would like to see more stories about Alice and Jasper from you whether it be ones like this, or actual full blown novels. You play both characters so well and I'm jealous . Because, 1. Your lemons are wonderfully written and have body and emotion to them.
2. you have more balls than me. I would be to embarrassed to post a full blown lemon story up!
In chapter 4, making love would be a sweet ending to this game of cat and mouse, coyote and roadrunner, fox and raven!
:) Hehe maybe you can help me get over my shyness!