Reviews for Eve of Forever
CathyD52 chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
Great story! Poor Jasper!
Lillywhite1 chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
Thanks for sharing your fantasy.
Dil9 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
That was so funny and loving at the same time. Poor jasper! So glad Emmett wasn't there.
Tish the Dish chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Lol! Awesome! Such love, such sensuality. It was beautifully written. Oh, and including Jasper cracked me up!
babesbraves chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
wow loved it! poor jasper and way to go eddie boy!
sissyb chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
i'm wet, gotta go !
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Awwwwww! Poor Jaz! very nice!
OrangeWatermelon4321 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
that was really good! loved the jasper thing in the end, hysterical!
Krystal Jaymes chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Hahahahhahaha, poor Jasper! Loved it! This should've been in Brekaking Dawn!
FMHC chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Canon Twific just the way I like it.
Sarahippy chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Nisa Cullen chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Great Story and a nice add with Jasper "feeling" the moment!
Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
So very good. I loved it. I never could understand why prissy Edward didn't just do "that" to relieve himself and Bella. I can't imagine living with that building up for 2 years especially as a teenager. You did a good job in writing this. Please Keep it up.
xoxo Edwardluvr oxox chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
This is THE VERY BEST STORY I've ever read! I LUVED IT! :D
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