Reviews for The Price of Balance
blb1000 chapter 13 . 6/15/2014
I'm stunned. This was quite a bit more graphic than her original van run forward to seeing how you turn this around.
blb1000 chapter 12 . 6/15/2014
I hope she remembers to Just Believe.
blb1000 chapter 11 . 6/15/2014
I expected them to be met by some sort of council at the dance where B's presence would be questioned. I like your ethereal version more. :D
blb1000 chapter 9 . 6/15/2014
But if her hearts desire changes, then his mission changes.
blb1000 chapter 8 . 6/15/2014
Again he doesn't let Alice explain. I guess they don't yet know not to bet against Alice. ;-P
blb1000 chapter 7 . 6/15/2014
I love that you've worked in similarities to Twilght, like him watching her sleep and her sleep talking. I'm already bereft that this story will be over too soon.
blb1000 chapter 6 . 6/15/2014
Frustrating that he didn't ask what Alice's other ideas were. Also frustrating that I'm reading this years after completion and now the stories & authors you recommend are gone. :-(
I do appreciate you keeping your stories available. Thank you!
blb1000 chapter 5 . 6/15/2014
She needs to have a talk with Esme re her meddling.
blb1000 chapter 4 . 6/15/2014
So it's an eye for an eye? Is she chosen because she has no one left? I'm assuming it's so tough because in death they would again be separated.
blb1000 chapter 3 . 6/15/2014
He's doing well so far with his human facade.
blb1000 chapter 2 . 6/14/2014
I've noticed that Edward has only appeared at night.
blb1000 chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
You've got my attention.
FluffyLiz chapter 10 . 5/29/2014
I hope he can find a way. And if he is, indeed, her 'balance', then he must surely be accommodated by the powers that be.
whilewewereyetsinners chapter 4 . 4/23/2014
I was wondering if he was an angel- very interesting twist. :)
FluffyLiz chapter 9 . 2/22/2014
Is Edward sulking in the forest, or desperately trying to figure out a way to keep from taking her life. Of course, he is unaware that, despite Bella 's initial response to the question of her heart's desire, she no longer wants to die, and he needs to talk to her.
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