Reviews for The Care and Feeding of Marines
head.chantal chapter 1 . 6/10
Love it "are you telling me you're playing fetch with the marines".
Jennaya chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
ROFL playing fetch with the Marines! I love it. I could so see this being in the show, and John joining in the fun.
Ardeliah chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
You made me giggle, with a hint of evil. Thank you. Good story.
AuroraBlix chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Yay! I KNEW I loved Lorne for a reason! I wanna play fetch with the Marines, cuz I could totally see that happening!

: )
datawolf39 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
cute!
Artemisdesari chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Very enjoyable. I've spent the last few days trying to quell my super craving for everything Lorne and Atlantis and this made me giggle like crazy in the staff room.
Diddune chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Funny, short and to the point. I really like this. Especially "I wanna play". You've got Sheppard summed up in three word !
Madances chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Good story! I liked it. Tracy
goldhorse99 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Love it...there just isnt more to say...keep comming back to it when I can do with a smile...Thank you
icestar-comet-moon chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Hee. That was lots of fun to read. I wonder if the Marines also see it as fetch...

Thanks for writing :3
SmartAleczGirl chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
lmao.! i literally laughed out loud reading this.!

"Major, are you telling me you're playing fetch with the Marines?"

"... Maybe?"

"I wanna play. Where are you?"

This is a conversation i could actually see in the show.! great job.!
tselea chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Well ... they do wear dogtags ...

Wonderful story, had me rotflmbo!
tsa33 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Absolutely Hilariuos!
Vaeru chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Brilliant! XD This would make a wonderful short comic strip. Thanks for writing!

Cheers!

~Vaeru
GreekEMTSlytherinSpriteFairy chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Oh dear lords that was hilarious! Cassie showed that to me and I am dying of laughter! That was awesome! I loved it!
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