|Reviews for A Murderer's Punishment|
| ImmortalShippo chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
the flak is my fav weapon, too. :3
| NTC MANIA 2009 chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
DAMN! NICE CHAPTER!
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
-NTC MANIA 2009
| tapioca two-step chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
You have an interesting concept of the Tournament teams; it actually makes a lot of sense. Why would a bunch of convicts follow any sort of leadership in a killing environment? I'd never thought of that before. :D Good job.
Overall, the style was a bit choppy and there were some grammatical errors here and there, but it was a very sensible story. Having him die at the end, after introducing him as a bloodthirsty and hardened murderer, was a nice juxtaposition and shows how brutal the Tournament is.