Reviews for Phoenix Song or, Hermione Granger and the HB P |
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jade7slytherin chapter 13 . 10/25 That waa very kind of Snape. You show this while still keeping him in character effortlessly. Ugh Ron! |
jade7slytherin chapter 10 . 10/25 Oh my gosh, poor child. This is such an interesting story. I'm so glad little Jocelyn was placed in Slytherin. Severus to the rescue! Loved the conversation between Poppy and Snape. |
jade7slytherin chapter 9 . 10/25 I absolutely loved the way you juxtaposed the professor's acknowlement of Hermione's Confundus (end justifying the means) with her induction into the Order, which will involve a fair amount of "doing what needs to be done". Brilliant writing, I'm loving this story. |
Ravenclaw chapter 22 . 7/24 So much time passed since you published this story. I just noticed it. I dont know if you still check the comments but i just wanted to say that it is very well story and i hope to read your own book someday. Good luck and thank you ️ |
Ravenclaw chapter 10 . 7/21 Second review They gave back the boomslang. Maybe mention it... it was honorable. That was a great lesson ... If he could teach harry this good Sirius would be alive maybe You write very well. |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/21 I wanted to leave a comment at the end and i now i just wanted to say i am enjoying reading your story. It is very well thought. It is very clever that you thought of arithmency P. typo... last chapter snape is considering blood status of Hufflepuff! I think it should be Slytherin? P.s. 2 : you make me look at Slytherin in a new light.️ Thanks. Kudos from Ravenclaws |
annija.koffein chapter 26 . 3/17 Incredible work! Thank you for sharing, I’m on my way to next one. |
Piletorn chapter 26 . 8/7/2023 This was a great read, specially for a first time writer. I’m very impressed |
Espied7 chapter 1 . 7/20/2023 Such a fantastic story! |
mjato chapter 26 . 2/5/2023 A delightful story told in an engaging tone. The characters are alive and vivid in a believable way. Plot holes and inconsistencies of the original books are woven into clever basis of new ideas and developments. Just lovely! Now I must run to read the sequels. Perfectly joyful! |
Sammypenny chapter 25 . 1/6/2023 Wonderfully written story. Captivating and believable. Just reread it again after a few years and just as good as I remembered. I couldn’t put it down and finished it in two days. Thank you for the wonderful story?! |
gymnopedie chapter 25 . 9/16/2022 If you're still checking this account... Thank you. For your first piece of fiction-wow! I could only hope to write so well. Really loved your versions of our favorite pair and the rest of the cast, too. I especially appreciated the mix of adolescent and quickly maturing young adult that you created in HG; as much fun as some fics are of a student-but-legal Hermione/Snape pairing, I often find the emotional arc in those fics doesn't quite manage to feel plausible or authentic. Yours absolutely does. I really, really loved how you built their dynamic, which made the culmination in that Felix Felicis kiss (!) ESPECIALLY poignant and perfect. |
Whittweet chapter 5 . 7/17/2022 I know exactly how Hermiones dad feels LOL us runners are a strange bunch |
Grey Area 1961 chapter 26 . 7/5/2022 Wonderful story. Thank you. I'm away to find the sequel. |
Maria221B chapter 26 . 6/16/2022 This SSHG fan fic can be easily the best I have ever read (I have been reading sshg fanfiction up to 10 years now in English and Spanish) even if the author haven't uploaded the epilogue yet (and sadly most likely never :cThe last chapter of this trilogy concludes lot's of things so just take it like the end. Definitely this trilogy should be a MUST for sshg fanfiction readers |