This was a great read, specially for a first time writer. I’m very impressed

Such a fantastic story!

A delightful story told in an engaging tone. The characters are alive and vivid in a believable way. Plot holes and inconsistencies of the original books are woven into clever basis of new ideas and developments. Just lovely!

Now I must run to read the sequels. Perfectly joyful!

Wonderfully written story. Captivating and believable. Just reread it again after a few years and just as good as I remembered. I couldn’t put it down and finished it in two days. Thank you for the wonderful story?!

If you're still checking this account... Thank you. For your first piece of fiction-wow! I could only hope to write so well. Really loved your versions of our favorite pair and the rest of the cast, too. I especially appreciated the mix of adolescent and quickly maturing young adult that you created in HG; as much fun as some fics are of a student-but-legal Hermione/Snape pairing, I often find the emotional arc in those fics doesn't quite manage to feel plausible or authentic. Yours absolutely does. I really, really loved how you built their dynamic, which made the culmination in that Felix Felicis kiss (!) ESPECIALLY poignant and perfect.

I know exactly how Hermiones dad feels LOL us runners are a strange bunch

Wonderful story. Thank you. I'm away to find the sequel.

This SSHG fan fic can be easily the best I have ever read (I have been reading sshg fanfiction up to 10 years now in English and Spanish) even if the author haven't uploaded the epilogue yet (and sadly most likely never :cThe last chapter of this trilogy concludes lot's of things so just take it like the end. Definitely this trilogy should be a MUST for sshg fanfiction readers

4 am in 2022absolutely beautiful 10/10 such a masterpiece

So glad to have found this again and re-read it! A terrific story I'll always enjoy. On to re-reading Phoenix Tears!

Hope you're still following your reviews, grangerous! I'm enjoying my re-read very much... just a question: your version of Vector and her matrixeven her exotic coffee addictionseems to be a nod to Caeria's Pet Project? It might be nice to make a mention somewhere, unless you already did and I missed it. Or was your Vector first? Hard to tell from the dates, but just thought it worth a mention.

I found this fic while exploring other authors' favorite fics... wow! It's hard to believe this is the first fiction you've written as an adult. This is a terrific story - great characterizations, imaginative interpretations of what was happening behind the canon scenes, and just so well written. And there are two sequels to explore! does the HP Happy Dance Thanks for sharing your amazing work with us. I'm off to read more!

This was amazing! You had me hooked the whole way through. I loved your characterizations of Snape and Hermione. They both felt true to character. The part where Snape asked Hermione if she slept with Krum had me rereading several times. It was so good. The Felix kiss wasn't bad either. :) I'm almost scared to check if the sequel is finished or not. I'm dying to know what happens next. You're a really great writer. Thanks so much for sharing!

who else thinks it’s gross that hermionies mom asking how good viktor is in bed

His feet were bare and drew her eyes despite her best efforts not to stare. They were long and narrow, with a sprinkling of black hairs across the knuckles of his toes.

LOL why