|Reviews for Runaway|
| AI chapter 2 . 5/21
Absolutely gold, in a chilling sort of way. Thanks for writing
| Ace Trainer Jessie chapter 2 . 4/9
Wow ! Great story ! I think I'm gonna have to start reading more Star Wars FanFiction.
| LivesForTheReveal chapter 2 . 3/8
Great story... and wow, it's only a few months younger than I am.
| kirallie chapter 2 . 3/1
Poor Luke but he never really stood a chance against Vader did he? And with his lifelong need for a father he'd probably never do the sith thing and kill his master? Sad he killed Biggs. What about Leia, she still out there?
| Malyx Blackfyre chapter 2 . 2/22
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17
This story is ridiculously good. So happy I read it.
| Ibskib chapter 2 . 12/11/2014
had sprang - had sprung (helping verb)
capitol - capital
help but smiling - help but smile
that very distinct - that a very distinct
to obeying - to obey (infinitive)
get up earlier - get up early (no comparative)
at meetings - at the meetings
pilot's lives - pilots' lives
but his wingman - but his wingmen
potential then he had - potential than he had
respect of your - respect for your
that revolted - that it revolted
shear size - sheer size
train the boy how to use it - train the boy in how to use it
won't have believed it - would not have believed it
the techs work - the techs' work
started at him - stared at him
summery - summary
for more then - for more than
more then that - more than that
If you disagree with any of the corrections please let me know and I'll explain, if you ever see this review that is, I didn't notice until now that you hadn't updated anything in a few years, hopefully I didn't waste my time :-)
| Ibskib chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
Here are Five instances where it should be 'than' instead of 'then' (remember the former is comparative, the latter temporal):
"then the pilots of the other team. The members of the other team had therefore started to dislike him even more then before"
"more then a couple of hours. Now he would stay in his TIE for a far longer time and he'd feel more like a real pilot then a student."
" then the others"
There are plenty of other crafts with the TIE moniker, so they should always be called TIE fighters, if you wanted to use a short form 'fighters' would make more sense, but it's also a bit too generic.
TIEs - TIE fighters
TIE - TIE fighter
| Krissy Pooh Bear chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
This story definitely ranks among my top five favorites. I love the different look you give to the Star Wars universe. This could have been canon. It was a serious possibility, and that's why I like it so much. Well written and well planned. I'm sorta late, but good job :)
| Mikeo chapter 2 . 9/1/2014
Though I am far too late.
And of little consequence.
This was f***ing AWESOME!
With innumerable thanks
The ever loyal Mikeo.
| Hawk chapter 2 . 7/29/2014
This was really good! Well written and enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing :)
| edboy4926 chapter 2 . 7/15/2014
Would have like to see the Rebellion's reaction to the announcemet though.
| edboy4926 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/15/2014
Loved itThanks for a great story.
| d1x1lady chapter 2 . 6/27/2014
Such a fascinating story! Could not stop reading it. Love your writing!