|Reviews for Fallen From Grace|
| merniizztat chapter 1 . 5/7/2017
| TinaF chapter 31 . 2/26/2017
Great story! Thank you for sharing
| OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 1 . 8/28/2016
I find it hilarious how andrewpine criticizes you about your grammar, when he can barely piece together a coherent sentence.
While the grammar is a bit poor in some places, this was still an enjoyable experience. Keep writing. That's the only way to become better.
| andrewpine chapter 6 . 11/11/2015
Sorry but your grammar and spelling is so distracting i can't read any was a good idea but i have to one day you will come back and correct all of the problems.
| andrewpine chapter 5 . 11/11/2015
Inhuman not inhumanly...dying not dieing...so she couldn't mate with a real vampire so her shin would be humon like and she could eat humon food.
| andrewpine chapter 4 . 11/11/2015
When we entered i saw her not seen...No one was talking to her...just ask she is very nice...the past is past...it's decided not deiced,just trying to help make you a better writer not trying to be nasty...the car cost well over...so Alice saw her future mate as a avian type shifter?
| andrewpine chapter 3 . 11/11/2015
''I got you enrolled not enlisted'',she isn't going into the military just school...''mostly because they have known each other their whole lives''... is she an archangel?
| andrewpine chapter 2 . 11/11/2015
Spelling and punctuation,beta...so what is the big secret she is hiding from her daughter?
| andrewpine chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
Always the self sacrificing Bella.
| LaverylK chapter 31 . 3/27/2015
I can totally see them falling and being saved. But I just wish Bella wouldn't do such a thing. And I'm so glad Alice got there in time. And I can't believe it's over. I hate when the story ends. It breaks me down. But overall it was a very good story. I love it.
| LaverylK chapter 30 . 3/27/2015
I love the "eye staring competition, holding your breath" part. Lol. Of course Alice would think of such things. But I can't believe Alice got hurt I know she's okay but still. It kind of sucks.
| LaverylK chapter 29 . 3/27/2015
I think they'll be okay.
| LaverylK chapter 28 . 3/27/2015
Whoooo. Bella's gonna get drunk.!
| LaverylK chapter 27 . 3/27/2015
I just realized something. Where is Jessica.?
| LaverylK chapter 26 . 3/27/2015
So Bella basically has the world in her hands.