|Reviews for This was not part of the plan|
| Myles the loaf chapter 10 . 3/11
I love, love, love this fic. I love it some much I've read it multiple times. I also love it so much that I didn't even consider putting this away when there were errors - something that usually has me put stories down immediately. If you'd like, I would love to beta for you and maybe clean this up so its genius is able to be read by even more people! I'm not sure how to work this site, so I'm not sure if you can reply to comments, but I check back often enough that I'm sure I could find your response if you leave one
| OrangeSunset1701 chapter 10 . 6/1/2016
Very tense! Great job!
| fann chapter 10 . 5/19/2013
are u a genius
| J'aime lire chapter 10 . 5/11/2013
OHMAHGOSH! When Gus was pondering what to do with Psych I thought for sure that Shawn was dead! It was such a relief at the end when I found out he wasn't that I almost started crying! I might still cry! :')
| Alohagirls101 chapter 10 . 4/22/2011
dude this story was awesome
| dragondancer123 chapter 10 . 2/5/2011
Well, in the later chapters, I would have gone over it with a fine toothed comb, or have a beta pick through it. There are a lot of errors, and it distracts from an otherwise well-written story.
Hip to be Square,
| talktoten chapter 9 . 1/29/2011
I read this a while back and a few days ago wanted to read it again.
You have no idea how frustrated I got, trying to find it. But I found it in the end. :)
It's really good. Just sayin'.
| Searching4sanity chapter 10 . 10/24/2010
Really great story! I especially like how you made Shawn almost die when Gus was walking through it! I was so scared you had killed him!
| ilovemyboys chapter 10 . 7/29/2010
Ohhhhh! So veryyyy good and descriptive! I like how you changed the original episode. I had some ideas for different endings to Shawn Takes a Shot in the Dark if you are up for writing them...(hint, hint)
Anyway, great job!
(Gives Kippling Croft a golden pineapple)
| Militant Delusionalist chapter 10 . 5/2/2010
Awesome story! I love alternate endings, and Shawn WHUMP so this was amazing to me! :D I love the detail you put in here. Great job! *favs*
| Taura Callisto chapter 10 . 10/21/2009
Very good story, I enjoyed it.
That said, I have a few nit-picky comments to make.
You renamed the co-copilot, you started off calling him Jim in one chapter and then for the rest of the story you called him Bill.
There was one spelling mistake I have to comment on as well. You used this word "fallow" quite often, but it is spelled 'follow', I normally wouldn't even say anything, but you used it often enough that it needed to be pointed out.
Finally, I was wondering what happened to Cox. Did he live? Did his family get to him? Did he and Shawn ever meet up again? Seems like they would get together after that adventure to at least have lunch and talk and whatnot. Plus, what happened with Leikin? She was wounded, did she get away, are you planning a sequel to tie the loose ends up?
Anyway, regardless of everything above, I did like you story. I might even reread it in the future if I come across it again. )
| maltose chapter 10 . 9/6/2009
BEST STORY i have EVER READ...readin? readed?...READ IN MY HOLE LIFE! I HAVE NO WORDS RIGHT NOW TO TELL YOU HOW MUCH I LOVED IT! I MEAN EVERYTHING WAS JUST SO WONDERFUL AND AMAZING AND WONDERFUL AND I KNOW I COULD PROBABLY COME UP WITH SOME BETTER WORD CHOICES RIGHT NOW BUT MY BRAIN HAS MELTED BECASE THATS JUST HOW AMAZING YOUR FANFIC WAS! OH MY GAWD YOU SHOULD WIN SOMETHING FOR WRITTING THAT!
excuse me i think im about to pass out.
| A maze thing chapter 10 . 8/1/2009
Gah! I had to scroll down really quickly to make sure you didn't kill Shawn with the first paragraph of your epilogue! But this story was so great! I love some Shawn whumpage! But you killed Jim! That was horrible! He was so nice, he's like a favorite uncle (though he wasn't in the story for a long time), but that was so sad when Shawn had to tell his family he was dead. I did love the little anniversary part though. It was heartbreaking. I'm glad that Shawn and Paul Cox got out of it okay. And I loved how you ended it with a nice little wrap up, though you didn't make it a perfect ending with Lindsey getting caught. I have to say, the last chapter was my favorite, I liked everyone's reaction and emotion towards Shawn's...well, adventure. Your writing is amazing. I definitely loved this story!
| heartfallen chapter 10 . 4/11/2009
Awesome story! It was a pleasure to read
| Lightest'Ink chapter 10 . 4/6/2009
Oh my gosh! YOu had me thinking he was dead! So NOT cool! O.o :O I have to say, I like the story though. ;)