|Reviews for Dogtags & Diamonds|
| latuacantante4him chapter 3 . 4/27/2009
Are they going to cross paths with Edward and Bella? Enjoyed it.
| latuacantante4him chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
| latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
WOW! What a home "coming." :) Enjoyed it.
| Kyrene once Blood Roses chapter 3 . 3/24/2009
I absolutely loved these oneshots. I'm kind of sad there isn't more reviews, there should be. I love the stories, they're such sweet army stories. And yes, the idea of them naked with dogtags was hot, your right. I loved this!
| ARFess96 chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
I have never known what it is like to have to wait for aomeone I love for that long. I was overwhelmed by the emotion you portrayed through Bella. Thank you for sharing this story.
| The Lady of the Land chapter 3 . 2/25/2009
| contygoldbarg chapter 3 . 2/19/2009
all the chapter have been awesome i loved bella and edward but the last one was simply perfect and im not a romanic myself but was so alice and jasper( the best couple ever) very well done : )
| jimemon chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Aw, that was much too sweet, I loved it! Great work :)
| RAEcouter chapter 3 . 1/28/2009
“Patience darlin’,” he whispered back, his lips resting on the shell of my ear. “I want to savor this moment.” - gah
Wedding night WIN! This is truly Alice, 100%. I feel it. Wonderful, truly!
Okay, I need me some Japser. I want to know how he felt when he walked in the Inn and saw her, and those four days - what was he thinking as he had to leave? - and when he took what she'd saved for him alone ... I want to know it all.
And then about 26 additional chapters after that!;)
| RAEcouter chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
"Marriage wasn’t just an idea or a distant option for us, it was a forgone conclusion." This struck me and I had to read it three times and then mention it here!
I enjoyed Bella's outburst that we didn't get from her perspective. I think you did E perfectly, but of course you had a great helper:)
I really feel their desperation for one another, not just because he's been gone but you really do touch on their innate purpose being fulfilled by being together in this chapter. I don't know if it's him being so open and verbal, or hitching the legs over and going somewhere they hadn't gone before even during all their years together. It is something and I love it! RAE
| RAEcouter chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Absolute hit! Come on T, you owned that lemon! I'd say yes, yes, yes I want this in Edward's perspective, but I checked ahead and everyone else had the same desire I did.
Okay, first of all I really enjoy how you described the base and the Army wives. I don't know, the fact that they are so unhappy and frivolous with their relationships was a great contrast to Bella and Edward's connection and need to remain true.
Her heels, the running, the distracted dinner. Love.
And, I feel like I could see literally Edward's muscles ... and dogtags:) ... not a bad sight I'll tell ya. Oh to have been in on that convo with you and Erica! ha
Drool worthy darlin'! Time for Edward ...
| Vi0lentSerenity chapter 3 . 1/26/2009
Oh how I love Alice and her fluffy and loving personality. If she were real she just might give me hope...after a few attempts to leave her jaded.
And Jasper. Well, there's no need to guess why i love him...Though i still want those pictures you no longer have the link to...
Oh the things i would do the Jackson haha "eat him"
But onto the story. I wasnt ready to have to beta this because i knew i wouldnt be able to be objective. I love your writing and when combined with JxA...well forget my brain goes into overload...
But seriously, i love it. Beyond it being JxA and by you.
I'm practically buzzing to see his side of it all.
| Vi0lentSerenity chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
I know i'm bias but i fucking love this story.
I giggled and (almost) drooled my whole way through. I love the alternating images of the story and of you asking your brother that ran through my mind the whole time i read.
I already told you my favorite line. so this will be a short review. I'm trying to think of other ways to promote this...besides putting it in my profile. Mainly because i want everyone to be mad jealous of my christmas present. I can not wait for JxA...and now that justin is home you better believe i will be pushing you to write more...after you done the whole welcome home thing :D
| chicagobella chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
I certainly appreciate your "research"! I am alerting this in the hopes that you will continue this story!
| kolfan88 chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Wow for a first time lemon writer that was great! Im really enjoying This Time Imperfect so keep up the great writing!