Reviews for My Heart's Own Slave
EmeraldGreen4Life chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
WAH! You made me get all teary eyed. Great story! I wish you had writte a happy ending, though.
EmeraldGreen4Life chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
I love this story so much.
Edward Elric is a cutiepie chapter 11 . 2/1/2009
That was an awesome chapter! I loved the waffle bit. It kinda reminded me of the first verse of the song 'All of My Love' by Led Zeppelin. AWESOME CHAPTER!
DragonShadow777 chapter 11 . 1/31/2009
oh it's a sad cliffhanger. :( ( but then I think about going to Disney world) and now I'm happy :D and as always I'm ready for the next chapter _

-DragonShadow7

Ps: I don't really have a ps, but I just wanted to put this here lol
Edward Elric is a cutiepie chapter 10 . 1/18/2009
awesome chapter! gah limes/lemons are a PAIN IN THE ASS TO WRITE! My fingers tingle and miss the keys when I have to write them! This really made my day! Especially after again for the 2nd time accidentally reading Megadeth yoai. I'm just not gonna search up FF on my favourite bands anymore. Save my poor eyes. LOL AWESOME AWESOME CHAPTER! The limey thing was CUTE!
DragonShadow777 chapter 10 . 1/17/2009
As always, I really enjoyed this chapter :) especially when Hana and Tsume were spying on them LOL my parents kept looking at me weird cause I kept giggling at my computer monitor. Anyways,( I use anyways alot, it must mean I get distracted alot lol ADD) good job :D

-DragonShadow7
DragonShadow777 chapter 9 . 1/12/2009
skiing! Lucky! I live so far south I have never seen snow :( only ice. How sad. But I don't really care for the cold that much any ways. Anyways, glad to hear there's gonna be some more romance, but please, nothing too graphic and detailed... You know what I mean... Again, anyways, have fun skiing while I'm stuck with a physics test :/

-DragonShadow7
Jinx313 chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
OMG YAY a good chap... even if you are going to get yelled at for make this chap so sad i think it was good i like writers that make twists and turns in stories it makes it more belivable

write another chap soon please *puppy dog eyes*
DragonShadow777 chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
oh I am so so angry at Ino! I just want to...to... Ok I need to think happy thoughts...m... Cookies and milk lol but I'm still sad lol

-DragonShadow7

Ps- darfoome is now one of my many favorite words. Even though it's not a real word:)
Edward Elric is a cutiepie chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
GAH! INO NEEDS TO GO JUMP IN A WELL! I dislike her even more now. I hope things go better for them. Man, Ino has a way of screwing EVERYTHING! XD
Edward Elric is a cutiepie chapter 7 . 1/11/2009
kyah! this chapter is so CUTE! xD I'm so happy they FINALLY kissed! HOORAH! and thanks for the cookie! YAY! *dances in a circle* Keep it UP! woo!
DragonShadow777 chapter 7 . 1/11/2009
Awesome! I got a cookie! Yay! :D and a great story to go along with it. Now all I need is some milk lol I loved the romance in this one and I'm ready for the next chapter

-DragonShadow7
DragonShadow777 chapter 6 . 1/9/2009
yup, it's me again! :). Ok, being truthfull, I very strongly dislike cliffhangers for the first minute, but then I'm glad. Cause it gives me something to look forward to:). Anyways, good luck on your tests and I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D
Jinx313 chapter 6 . 1/8/2009
ok i would like to know who in gods name likes cliffhangers cus i hate them...

ok keep writing love the story
Edward Elric is a cutiepie chapter 6 . 1/8/2009
AWESOME CHAPPIE! Gah! I wonder what is gonna happen next! extremely awesome chappie! kep it up!
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