i wish a guy would say that to me...

Sure it was a little cheesy and not your best, but now that you've written something, I'm sure the next chapter will come easier. But I enjoyed this for it's uniquness; it's not often that one gets to read about Lily being insecure in James' affection for her - very good characterization on your part.

This one, however cheesy it may be, is adorable. Keep updating and SOON!

Despite the clicheness (which I love), I still ADORE this. The dialogue was perfect, as was your imagery. Favorite line:

"I want a girl who stays up insanely late just to count the stars and then bitches about her lack of sleep in the morning."

Great job! You just need to write more often (*wink wink nudge nudge*).

Love,

Ela. :D

aw I thought this was a very cute and sweet moment in the everyday lives of Lily and James :)

always waiting for more,

HpTwilightLvr

it may be cheesy but it's so swet(:

x

Loved this one as well. All of these were great! :D

Terribly beautiful ... :D

So sad ... I nearly cried! Not really, but I think it would've been awesome if I did.

This one is my new favorite!

He's so incredibly cheesy sometimes, but that's why we all love him, right? :D

:D Yay!

So awesome. I'm speechless.

:)

:D