Reviews for Hurt
tanseynz chapter 23 . 7/3/2014
Now that's sane. Love the idea of him all tied up * wink*
tanseynz chapter 21 . 7/3/2014
You'd think some of the kids would have stopped Mike and Jessica, or the supervising adults. Maybe it's a pro-bully school. Sweet ending made up for it. Nice use of bits of canon too.
tanseynz chapter 19 . 7/3/2014
Very alpha-male. The bit about Emmett in a neglige? Priceless!
tanseynz chapter 13 . 7/3/2014
Jessica or Lauren might say 'Wala', but Alice knows better and would say 'Voila!'
tanseynz chapter 11 . 7/3/2014
Wtg Bella!
tanseynz chapter 10 . 7/3/2014
She's speaking to him as an equal, yet she doesn't seem to realise it yet. Clever segue from Bella-as-victim.
tanseynz chapter 8 . 7/3/2014
Good for him blowing up at her. She needs to realise some of her own actions make things worse, rather than assuming everything negative is external. Learning to like herself might be the hardest challenge. Really liking this story and the characters you're developing.
tanseynz chapter 5 . 7/3/2014
Good to see someone's on her side, even though he hasn't met her yet.
tanseynz chapter 4 . 7/3/2014
She's got more guts than she thinks. This is an interesting Bella. Much more real than canon.
tanseynz chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
A brilliant descriptive scene-setting. You have the internal dialogue about her pain and anger and determination to self punish well mastered. The reader can feel Bella and for a moment, become her. Looking forward to the rest of this story.
Edward'sDJ chapter 11 . 7/3/2014
I love the separation of Edward and Adolph.
Edward'sDJ chapter 9 . 7/3/2014
I'm guessing the students won't be impressed with Bella associating with the Cullens.
Edward'sDJ chapter 7 . 7/3/2014
I suspected the 'meek and mild' was only skin deep.
Edward'sDJ chapter 5 . 7/3/2014
This won't help with Bella's self esteem.
Edward'sDJ chapter 3 . 7/3/2014
Edward seems very meek and mild so far.
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