Reviews for The Ex Factor : Edward & Bella
SanguineTaurean chapter 2 . 1/1
I can't remember exactly what Emmett said about Tanbitch's face, but something about it looking like something that fell out of Edward's butt crack? LOL That character is a hoot!

With this group either there's going to be a lot of moaning and groaning or screaming matches. lol
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 1/1
Oh, goodie! Another story where I can hate on Tanbitch! LOL E&B definitely have some deep-seated unresolved feelings to contend with and resolve. Why on earth did Emmett text Tanbitch to meet them at the club? That was not even funny and I would smack him upside the head for that crap. lol
jk chapter 13 . 6/11/2016
soooo Edward was just going around getting blow jobs from EVERYONE is that what your saying?
bella might not think less of him but I FUCKING DO

they broke up cause Edward was about to fuck Tanya in her house...then you have Edward going around fucking everyone...and bellas only fucked one other guy? that's not fair...bella should have hooked up with more people then Edward...since they broke up because he fucking cheated!
jk chapter 11 . 6/11/2016
I really hate reading alices povs...cause really? who fucking cares! all that whore does is annoy me!

and bella would have beat her fucking ass...I was mad that bella just stood there while alice was yelling at her...bella should have just started beating that stupid little skank into the ground...I found myself thinking bella should just reach out and break her fucking neck
jk chapter 10 . 6/11/2016
god...I don't know how this fucking happened...dur dur dur...im on the floor in my boxers with two super models!

really Edward? do you have to check out and fucking flirt with EVERY FUCKING GIRL YOU SEE? its fucking disgusting...no wonder no one gives a fucking rats ass about you...no one wants you with bella...why? hmm lets see
cause your a cheating fucking whore
you think whores are sexy
you flirt with EVERYONE
YOU ALMOST FUCKED YOUR BEST FRIEND
and still want to fuck your best friend

your a nasty piece of shit
jk chapter 9 . 6/11/2016
I fucking hate alices character soooo fucking much. If I was in that house with them id fucking stab that whore...she goes right to Edward trying to fukc him...then right to jasper like the desparate fucking skank she is!
jk chapter 7 . 6/11/2016
I'm sorry what? did he "make love" to bella right after flirting with alice all night? kissing alice? telling alice that he wanted to fuck her?
you do realize that you've cheapened their "love" to almost fucking nothing right?
jk chapter 6 . 6/11/2016
so that was Edward and bella?

I didn't like reading it not knowing...cause I didn't know if I should hate the girl or not LOL...if it was alice and Edward...omg I wanna fucking kill that bitch
jk chapter 5 . 6/11/2016
e and a? fucking never
jk chapter 4 . 6/11/2016
I love what gross whores everyone is...alice "loves" Edward but secretly wants jasper...Edward "loves" bella but "loves" alice and fucks Tanya and wants a threesome with bella and her SISTER...jasper loves bella but secretly wants alice...
its fucking gross
jk chapter 3 . 6/11/2016
That was probably the grossest shit ive ever read...alice? ewwwwwwww

I'm not gonna lie I'm pretty fucking pissed that Edward went that far...it was soooo hard to read!
jk chapter 1 . 6/11/2016
sounds to me like Edward started hooking up with Tanya and that's why bella and him broke up
kitacullen89 chapter 18 . 6/7/2016
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lillianolivia.white chapter 7 . 4/3/2016
Edward and Bella's lovemaking was just beautifully written. Good job. I feel bad for Alice, but she has been Edwards best friend. And that's where she will have to stay. Jasper will be ok.
lillianolivia.white chapter 6 . 4/3/2016
It was Edward & Bella last night. Yes tell him and get it out of the way.
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