Reviews for The Ex Factor : Edward & Bella
Gasaway Alley chapter 3 . 1/10/2009
I love the suspense...the twists...the turns! Please keep them coming.
VaL PaL chapter 3 . 1/10/2009
you are such an awesome writer! i read some of your other works and loved them too. I really like the Ex-Factor and how you twisted things up giving some drama and adding things that are very unexpected. Can't wait for you to write more. Stay inspired and keep writing D
EmmCee16 chapter 3 . 1/10/2009
I am absolutely in love with this story!

I can't wait to see how Edward and Bella's relationship turn out.

Update soon pleasee!
monamai chapter 3 . 1/10/2009
great amazing wonderful chapter! (the flashback are great)

this is my favourite story
easilyobsessedctc chapter 3 . 1/10/2009
AMAZING! I have fallen for this story. One of the BEST I have ever read. EVER. I absolutely LOVE that your chapters are very long. So keep that up. I like how Alice and Edward are good friends, but it also doesn't fit right with me. But it's just all a part of your amazing plot. I wish there were more Edward/Bella moments but I know I must be patient. Please, oh PLEASE update SOON!
PlayingwithLove chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
ahh! another AMAZING chapter!
peacetwilightlove chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
omg this story is crazy and wonderful!

update soon!
Silversoul5 chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
OMG! THAT WAS SO FREAKEN AMAZING! i cant believe you stopped the chapter this soon. i REALLY want to know what's gonna happen next. I cried like 3x while reading this TT~TT. thank you for posting. please post the next chapter up soon.
lovelywendy chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
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deffinetly one of the best !

love love love the long chapters

reminds me of my brother's best friend :O
pitzfer chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
Love how Edward is and all the mini flashbacks you put in. I have to say though, that the whole Edward and Alice part was so awkward to read. I know in the story they are not siblings, but I have that image of them engraved in my mind so reading this was horrible for me. I am so happy they did not do it. Lol. Cant wait for the next chapter, hopefully the Alice and Edward scenes of that kind are over haha.
perfectshadeofdarkblue chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
the pictures of the cabin are absolutely stunning...where is that? and the rings - so cool!

really, this story is absolutely amazing. you've done such a great job and only 3 chapters in. all the emotions are so real coming from everyone, i can't help but just get sucked into it.

i'm curious to hear from jasper soon, to find out what he thinks of this whole situation. they've been friends for three years and he's completely in love with her and he knows all about edward and he just seems so okay with everything. has he really waited three years to kiss her? for her to be okay with him? to feel like he was good enough for her? i'm just amazed by that and am excited to learn more about that relationship.

the same for rosalie. i'm really curious to read what was going on in her head with jacob.

emmett, too. of course he can be a sweet guy, especially when alice needs it. but i'd love to hear specifically from him, too.

can't wait to read more!
Edward's-a-beefcake chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
Thank you thank you for not letting Edward and Alice have actual sex... can you say incest (in my eyes anyway) I love the story and cant wait to hear the back story in full.
sallyjayburton chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
wow! amazing.. cant wait for the next chapter!
missouriangel chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
This is so god! Wow that was a pretty sexy scene played in my head with Jacob and Rosalie and with Emmett on the couch! I told my husband about this and he laughed and said I was reading porn haha And oh my...Alice sure did pick a great time to put her feelings on the line like that. Edward...gosh I'm just feeling pretty bad for him cause he loves Bella so much and doesn't tell her, but hopefully now she knows and we can move that direction. But I'm sure there will be some (great) drama and fun till we get there. I love your writing and hope you post soon! Also love that your chapters a long! Thanks!

Angel
Darkchyld1980 chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
WOW! I can't wait to read another chapter. This is one awesome story you got going on here!
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