Reviews for The Ex Factor : Edward & Bella
lovelywendy chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
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deffinetly one of the best !

love love love the long chapters

reminds me of my brother's best friend :O
pitzfer chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
Love how Edward is and all the mini flashbacks you put in. I have to say though, that the whole Edward and Alice part was so awkward to read. I know in the story they are not siblings, but I have that image of them engraved in my mind so reading this was horrible for me. I am so happy they did not do it. Lol. Cant wait for the next chapter, hopefully the Alice and Edward scenes of that kind are over haha.
perfectshadeofdarkblue chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
the pictures of the cabin are absolutely stunning...where is that? and the rings - so cool!

really, this story is absolutely amazing. you've done such a great job and only 3 chapters in. all the emotions are so real coming from everyone, i can't help but just get sucked into it.

i'm curious to hear from jasper soon, to find out what he thinks of this whole situation. they've been friends for three years and he's completely in love with her and he knows all about edward and he just seems so okay with everything. has he really waited three years to kiss her? for her to be okay with him? to feel like he was good enough for her? i'm just amazed by that and am excited to learn more about that relationship.

the same for rosalie. i'm really curious to read what was going on in her head with jacob.

emmett, too. of course he can be a sweet guy, especially when alice needs it. but i'd love to hear specifically from him, too.

can't wait to read more!
Edward's-a-beefcake chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
Thank you thank you for not letting Edward and Alice have actual sex... can you say incest (in my eyes anyway) I love the story and cant wait to hear the back story in full.
sallyjayburton chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
wow! amazing.. cant wait for the next chapter!
missouriangel chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
This is so god! Wow that was a pretty sexy scene played in my head with Jacob and Rosalie and with Emmett on the couch! I told my husband about this and he laughed and said I was reading porn haha And oh my...Alice sure did pick a great time to put her feelings on the line like that. Edward...gosh I'm just feeling pretty bad for him cause he loves Bella so much and doesn't tell her, but hopefully now she knows and we can move that direction. But I'm sure there will be some (great) drama and fun till we get there. I love your writing and hope you post soon! Also love that your chapters a long! Thanks!

Angel
Darkchyld1980 chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
WOW! I can't wait to read another chapter. This is one awesome story you got going on here!
justmegsly chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
So the entire time I was reading this my heart was literally in my throat. I don't know what else to say other than my heart was in my chest and that never happens. I'm absolutely insanely craving more.
ALEXXsugar chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
omgg! that was soo good! i feel bad for alice though. please tell me that her and jasper will get together! are they?
blueeyes11354 chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
It is a Bella and Edward story, it's about their journey to get back together. :) I really enjoyed this chapter, I especially liked the pairing of Jacob and Rosalie, not just because they clearly hated each other in Breaking Dawn but because it was a pretty hot scene. lol I can't wait to read more.
koolioettetheweirdo chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
wow, amazing chapter! your chapters are so long, so theres tons of drama in one. everything seems so messed up for everyone but rosalie and jake right now. hope you update soon!
sxkitn chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
I realy like the way that even though they are human you are bring in things from the vamiper aspect into this. Just subtle things, but i like it.

Keep it up. I an truly enjoying this story. cant wait to see whats next. :)
21mm chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
I LOVE THIS STORY.

Yes, I love awesome discoveries.

I cannot WAIT for Bella and Edward to reunite again, its going to be explosive. ahh!

and Edward tucking in Bella was SO SWEET, too sweet. Ugh, its amazing. I really love the flashbacks too, so i can't wait for more of those. I really love what you are creating!

::will be checking email constantly for an update O_O::

PS. Katy Perry's "Thinking of You" relates SO WELL to this
nothingatallreally chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
LOVING this story. Truly, its so cute and i love it, Its like reading Bold and the Beautiful only better and way more entertaining. Keep up the good work :D
Gaby chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
omfg. pure genius. and i love the end of the chapter. makes it 108247x1 times better, if thats even possible (:
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