Reviews for Dreams
another.creative.lover chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
I like ramen verse!Itachi. He's very real in the sense that his lack of social interaction would make him more withdrawn, so he wouldn't be the sexy Casanova as he is in silk kimono. c;

Not that I mind sexy!/horny!Itachi. Heheheh.
young kagome chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Good idea Sakura!
Leiyn chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
if this is how itachi learned how to cuddle, im really curious how Itachi started their first kiss! knowing itachi in ramen verse.. or.. im even wondering who did the kiss first! ahaha XD
erin chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Itachi is so cute...
Eliphante chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Asiqodhsok why! Ugh stupid bumps in the road and fat fingers! I'm sorry!

I didn't notice anything strange grammatically. The fanfiction had good diction as always. It flowed really nice.

Here are some moments I really liked or found amusing:

- "... and it was then that the stoic Uchiha decided that the woman was dangerous even when asleep."

I can just imagine Itachi looking at Sakura's peacefully sleeping form and deeming sleeping!Sakura a threat to his well being, hahaha. I thought it was funny.

- "She shot him an almost innocent look."

Key word being almost. Seems like Sakura knew just what she was doing to a bewildered Itachi!

- '"Really…" she chided him sleepily, her eyes beginning to close again. "Go to sleep, Itachi. You can always worry tomorrow."'

I love how Sakura knows Itachi so well that she tells him to "worry tomorrow." Their relationship is adorable; with socially inept Itachi and bold Sakura just about any interaction between them is hilarious. Who's wearing the pants in the relationship now Itachi?! Haha.

Ooh we're finally almost home. I think this was one of your pieces that had be curious about your various verses and it made me want to read more. I actually think I was delighted when I saw that there was so many ItaSaku fanfiction written by you. I'm thankful that this pairing has such an greater like you in its fandom!
Eliphante chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Hi Paws!

I'm still stuck in Jakarta traffic so I thought I'd review another one of your story! I think we passed about half way a few minutes go, after maybe an hour in the car? :'D

This may have been the second one of your fanfics that I've read. And I loved it. I remembered showing it to my friend right away. We were still in the early stages of shipping Itachi x Sakura; the stage where you read as many fanfics of that crack pairing you can find, haha. It was kind of hard to find some nicely written ItaSaku fanfiction with a good plot at the time, so finding your stories was like a haven for us. Especially because we were feeling particularly like grammar nazi after having to write college essays and proof read them.

Grammatically, I didn't notice anything odd. Dicti
theforesttree chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
It's amazing how this might actually be a problem for Itachi. :D I love the way you wrote him worrying about something so...silly?
soph chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Awesome fluff! Haha
Kin chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
I can easily see Itachi being a 'cuddler'. Great job!
thetinroof chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Itachi learning to cuddle! How cute! :D
Oro-shadow1 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Ah that was rather interesting, I'm speechless.
Miss Ashlynn chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
This is absolutely adorable. Love it love it love it! You're a great writer and I love the way you describe his thought processes, how he has to analyze everything. It reminds me of Sai actually. Great job:)
Motoko The Red Queen chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Nice way to solve the kicking problem :D
2worlds1girl chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Cute story!
Lea chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
thank you for writing this it made me so happy. it's so cute and i laughed at your answer for the "questions that i would like to answer before you ask". ( continues to gush like a fangirl for 5 minutes then realized she was gushing like a fangirl and backspaced)
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