Reviews for Sweetest Child of Mine
J.W. Appel chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Yeah, it's me again.

I just wanted to do about five things:

1. Once again apoligise for my inexcusable beheavior and I want to thank Minikun-chan for calling me out. I also want to apoligise to anyone else I offended. I can assure you it was temporary insanity.

2. Happy Thanksgiving/Merry christmas eary.

3. I hope you get your inspiration back soon

4. You can skip the arm-fart thing.

5. Thanks for listening.
Saber4040 chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
I found these stories to be really funny. I also like the idea of a Goku and Fasha one.
J.W. Appel chapter 3 . 4/26/2010
I have two more requests:

1. A face-making contest between 18 and Marron.

2. A tickle-fight between Chi-chi and Kid Gohan.
J.W. Appel chapter 1 . 4/17/2010's me again.

I know I must think I'm a two-faced jerk for how I've been acting and I know it'll probably doubt the sinccerity of what I'm about to say based on my previous beheavior and you have every right to doubt me and to be angry with my insane beheavior over a story but I urge you to please hear me out just one final time:

You are one of the first DBZ writers on this site to actually come through with one of my requests. Time and time again,they've been rejected,refused and ignored, and you really made my day when you actually did one. But when it took you so long to make a third chapter and then said you couldn't do the last request I gave you {Chi-Chi/Pan fart contest} I was so miffed due to the long wait and I guess I was a bit jealous that Frankokomando got his/her request and it didn't match up with the theme of this story {to be honest,the only reson I thought you would take Chi-Chi/Pan was because of the first chapter.

I know I had no right to react the way I did,first saying it was alright and exploding on you like a lunatic and I don't really know what me beheave that way. And the whole fake name thing was the result of a misunderstanding. I thought that the reason you weren't updating was because you were angry with me {ducks to avoid beig hit by computer.} I know that was really judgemental considering I don't even know you and I know the whole fake name thing was a really terrible thing to do because of it.

I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me for all that I've done. You truly are a very talented writer and I had no right to treat you the way that I did. I humbly ask for a second chance.

If you find reason to doubt the sincerity of this apology, I completely understand and should you choose not to accept it, I will never bother you again.

If you do decide to give me another chance, I still have some requests that I honestly do want and I hope you can find it in your heart to do them:

1. Videl armwrestling with Pan {Have Pan and Videl have a muscle-flexing contest at one point too.}

2. Chi-chi and Goten armpit farting contest {I know you already did Goten/Chi-Chi but please consider and I changed my idea so that it's parent and child and slightly less gross.}

3. Vegeta sparring with his mother.{It should take place when Vegeta's a kid and his mother wins}

4. Goku sparring with his mother {This should take place in the After-life and Goku's mom should revel she can go Super Saiyan}

5. Could you possibly combine the two Bulma/Trunks ones {the dog and the strawberry eating contest} together? Bulma could have a flashback of this while playing with an eight year-old Trunks and then they have a strawberry eating conntest to beat boredom because both Ideas are too cute to choose from.

6. A sequel to chapter two wher a slightly older Bulla challenges Bulma to another belching contest and Bulma decided to let Bulla because Vegeta was watching so Vegeta would be proud of his daughter.

I would really apreciate it if you considered these and I hope you do forgive me..

A few minor details about the requests:

1. Pan wins at armwrestling.

2. Chi-Chi wins the armpit fart contest.

3. Goku's fight with his mother is a draw and please don't make her Fasha because there's too much evidence against it.

4. the dog has to be a girl and The growling contest has to last for a few seconds {the dog growls, Bulma growls louder,the dog growls even louder and Bulma ROARs,scaring the dog off} oh yeah, and Bulma challenges the dog to growl louder than her.

5. Don't concentrate on sound effect for the growls or burps just describe them as stuff like "huge burp" "window-rattling belch" or "mighty roar." Chapter two was great but it was heard to tell who was burping at whom at one.

I really hope this isn't too demanding and hope you'll forgive me.

Thank you for your time.


J.W. Appel.
minikun-chan chapter 3 . 3/31/2010
Woaahh, some messed up reviews here. O_o

Anyways, after reading every single chapter of "Dearest Child of Mine" I was thrilled to see a follow-up. And so far, I adore what I'm reading. ) AMAZING concept honey, well done.

Also, don't let the other "reviews" get to you- it is your fic, so don't feel rushed or pressured- it's already amazing as it is.

As for any requests... hm... how about a tickle fight between the Kame house family? (If it could only be between one parent however, I'd say make it 18.)

Once again, thanks alot for this adorable concept- I love reading about parent-child interactions )

(Also, to J.W. Appel... please... calm down.)
maty chapter 3 . 2/8/2010
hello puedes hacer una historia donde incluyas a todos los personajes okey como bardock goku goten y gohan raditz vegueta tronkos
J.W. Appel chapter 3 . 12/25/2009
Merry Christmas!
J.W. Appel chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Update soon!
J.W. Appel chapter 3 . 9/30/2009
About what I said before...I know I said I was okay with it the first time but the second time was the way I really felt and I'm sorry for not being straightforward the first time. However, my argument still stands.

Update soon.
J.W. Appel chapter 3 . 8/30/2009
I'm sorry But I have to take issue with something here:

You say you can't do the last request I'm asking for because the characters involved in the scenario because they're not parent and child but the very first chapter was written in for Roshi and Krillin, two people who aren't even biologicaly related,let alone father and son? Also, your other reviewers said something about writing interactions between in-laws and you didn't openly object to them,you only singled out my request! I realise that you don't know me and I really have no right to tell you what to do with your own st6ory but I feel I'm being treated unfairly.

I'm sorry if this upsets you but it's how I feel.
J.W. Appel chapter 3 . 8/30/2009
I still want it done and you can make it Fasha if you want.

As for the other one, how 'bout Bulma and TrunkS? Nice to see you again.
Frankokomando chapter 3 . 8/6/2009
:D An update! :D \o/ Woot!

I enjoyed reading it :D Wish it was a bit longer, but whatever it was good :D

Hmm, the only request I can think of is maybe a Krillin and Marron story o; Since Krillin is one of my favorite characters :D Other then that I can't think of anything :P
KidGoku13 chapter 3 . 8/6/2009
I've always kinda thought about that myself. ;P This was very sweet! X3

Oohs! I has a request! :d Bardock/Goku! XD (didn't ya see it coming?)

Gagawop Wuvs Yu!(And Goten!)

-Kid Goku 13
VeggieBlueRaven chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
Oh the sugar! The sweet fluffyness is too much! lol These are really too cute hun. I especially loved this one.

hum,I have an idea if you're interested,

Bardock having a training session with chibi Raditz. ;; Any thing would be cute really. But, maybe little Raditz gets hurt and Bardock helps him? lol, The first time I fell down and skinned my knee when I was little, i thought I broke myself permanently. ;; I didn't understand that it would heal and be ok. I just kept saying "oh no, oh no" over and over until my mom told me it would get better. lol, Anyway, I'd like to see a Raddy and Bardock moment.

But anything would be fun. I look forward to your next care!

GotenForever chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
absolutely brilliant. And to think the prince of saiyans could lose to what he would call 'a weak female specimen of the human race'. In a belching competition!

Please do one with a fart competition!

Sick but satisfying!
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