|Reviews for Baker's Chocolate|
| jai ho x chapter 4 . 5/21/2012
i read this a few years ago, loved it, and just had to read it again! it's such a cute story, i love to believe that edward is a little more normal and that he loved at least ONE other person in all his years!
| Bellaangel383 chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
i love it!
| asthesunshines chapter 4 . 11/11/2009
| Hollywood007 chapter 4 . 7/5/2009
Fantastic story. I really like how you tied it together with his initial relationship with Bella. Great title too.
| ttttrer chapter 4 . 5/15/2009
Hey its Alexis-Jane from the twilighted review thread great story I love a happy ending lol
| birdspotting chapter 4 . 5/8/2009
aw *wipes tear this was cute it made me cry! i actually read this cause my best friend read it and made me read it! i never thought it be so cool!
| A Cullen Wannabe chapter 4 . 3/29/2009
Great Story...I saw reference to it in one of Marykat's stories. I love MK...she's the sweetest...and I loved your story...excellent!
| like smoke in my lungs chapter 4 . 3/3/2009
Aww, this is such a sweet story! It's a good explanation for why Edward would have been so scared of Bella running away even after she had long excepted what he was.
Only thing I don't like is that he had anoter love other than Bella...but it's much more realistic. Life isn't perfect, and love certinally isn't either. )
| kittkatt123 chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
this story was so cute.
i loved it so much.
great job writing it.
| Scarlet Paige chapter 4 . 2/19/2009
Great story! I wanted to keep reading, you should explore more stories like this! The love in Edwards words are truly sincere!I am trying to capture Edwards past as well, have a look and tell me your thoughts if you don't mind!
| mysecondreality chapter 4 . 2/12/2009
This was a sweet story. Short, but sweet. I was suprised at Bella's reaction; I had expected her to be at least a little irked that he had kept the secret from her so long. Your story offers a good explanation of why Edward has such negative views of himself. I really enjoyed this, and I'll have to look into more of your work:)
| mysecondreality chapter 2 . 2/12/2009
I know you said Nessie is almost in her teenage years, or something like that, but do you know her exact age? That would make it easier for my mental visualization.
| mysecondreality chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
I like your exposition, and your voice is wonderful! I don't really like the name Miranda, haha, but other than that the story is perfect so far!
| xLove-Hate-Relationshipx chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
I like this idea, and couldn't find any errors. This is my way of returning the favor. xDD
| GatorGirl chapter 4 . 2/3/2009
I really like your story. I've always wanted to know more about Edward before he became a vampire.