Reviews for My Real Unreal Friend
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 3 . 8/21/2012
TT Poor Rosette and Joshua. I am sure they'll feel very lonely from now on. Well at least Chrono can try and cheer Rosette up.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 8/21/2012
Aww well at least Joshua and Rosette are still together. Rosette would feel super lonely is Joshua was adopted, even thoug Chrono is with her.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
How cute. I wonder if Chrono is a ghost. It's kinda sad that Rosette is treated as an outcast.
RYNO chapter 42 . 5/3/2011
Hey Lotus. This is a really good fanfic; Chrono Crusade is one of my favorites and you've gotten the banter down really well.

Couple things though. One is to increase the amount of imagery you have; just saying what the background just generally looks like can greatly increase the quality of your story.

The second is TO GET YOUR REAR IN GEAR AND GET THIS STORY UPDATED! Geez, it's been half a year since you updated! I wanna see what happens next!

Eh-hem... anyway, good job.
nekoneko423 chapter 42 . 4/2/2011
i hope you update soon!it has taken a few days to read but so far its been worth it
hikaru76 chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
I think a lot of your stories are awesome and this one is one of my favorites! I caught a few minor errors but they didn't slow me down. Can't wait to read the rest!
ranchiki chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Omg i loooooooooooove this story actually in general i love you youre a wonderful author i never get bored of your stories im so glad that you updated keep up the good work!
Alice chapter 42 . 11/14/2010
Whew, you finally updated (',')

I'm really curious about what that woman did. After all, Chrono said that he experienced non-physical pain...
Midnight Blackbird chapter 42 . 11/14/2010
you finally updated

yay, I must say, I'm a big fan of the story!

the chapter was great, got me kind worried... poor Mary, she didn't deserve the grudge

keeping my eyes on the story
Shadow-chan93 chapter 42 . 11/13/2010
D: *hits woman with baguette*

Doesn't look good for Mary and Chrno now D:

Will Mary burn on the pyre? she is a "witch" after all.
L chapter 4 . 5/26/2010
Why are you so hard on Rosette? That frist Family was obusly loded, a threed child would have been no trubble for them, so why did,t thay? Is there problem with perfetness in that family? And what was with that other cuple that adoped her? These where Verey questionable people, so why is it that were able to adoped her at all? I don't konw area this taks place in but shrlly ther must have been some suspicion about them. I meen look at how you discribed them, and they where just aloud to adobed with backgroud checks or anything? Whats up with that?
MechaUltimaZero chapter 8 . 3/3/2010
Yes, this is a fairly good chapter. Very believable.

...

You can blink now. -_-
MechaUltimaZero chapter 6 . 3/3/2010
Nah, I like this chapter. Rosette's beginning to go a bit back to her normal state, I think.
MechaUltimaZero chapter 2 . 3/3/2010
Sadly, I've only read volumes 3 and 7 of the manga (it's all the more I could get hold of) but I fell in love with Chrono Crusade after reading just three pages! Anyhow, I like this fic, and I look forward to the rest of it.
Shadow-chan93 chapter 41 . 2/18/2010
aha, was war das denn für ne Prüfung?

Sowas wie ne Mature-Prüfung, die einen jungen zu einem erwachsenen Dämon macht?

und woher weiß sie, dass andere ihn suchen? er hats ihr doch noch nicht gesagt... und auch das mit 'er ist zu schwach' das hat er ihr auch nicht gesagt...

Spannend! schreib schnell weiter!

she came back with another clean cloth which was clean

ach ne, das saubere Tuch ist sauber XD
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