|Reviews for Beautiful Boy|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
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| A Bleeding Black Rose chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
OMIGOSH I WANNA READ MORE NOW! COME ON WRITE MORE LIKE NOW! NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW! !
| black heide chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Wow, that's really good, if you finish this story (and i hop you do) please put it up for me to see or send me a message and a like to it, your very talented and i hope to read more from you :D
| AshleyRuth chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
You need to finish this!
| RonRulez chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
This sounds great! I am eagerly anticipating more.
| HJP chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
wheres the rest!
| asftt-fbtw chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
this is a really good story and i really wish you would finish it because i want/NEED to know what happens next, hah
| Farry chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Hey! I'm new and your story was the first i read. i liked it but it had loads of punctuation mistakes. sorry i just had to point it out it was nagging at me ah! lol nah i did like the story but you left it at a cliffhanger i want to know what happens! Why did you make it soo captivating? but Im going to read the real story - Ihavent read it, i saw the word YAOI and i needed to read the rest lol anyways thanks for the story
| govener fink chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
I Liked it a lot...post some more!
| RosewrappedinLace chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
when erin goes omigosh you dont need to put the () there they are totally unnecssicary. Sorry if i misspelled that but i havenever had to use it in writting before. Plus i suck a spelling half the time and the other half i have checked how to spellthose words so many times that i will never misspellthem is weired 'cause english is my best class. "However,his brothers..." that part would flow better if you removed the , after however and left the one right before "or hoped".your storys you have read Lord of the Rings you should read the first tow chapters of a story called"Anywhere".If you chose haldir,romance and in
-progress you will find it pretty dosnet seem like a well writteen story when you read it so when i reveiwed it instead of just reveiwing it i got her email and found out she is not a native english speaker so i thought i would try to recrute some reviewers. you know 2 heads better than one more the a good story with an awsome plot and i thought you were an awsome writer and that you might spot something i missed and you might have an awsome idea for her , yeah weired thing to ask but it just seemed to make sense. so yeah if you do read it she messes up 3 and tree. . If you read all of my half asleep ramblings than your amazinly patien.