|Reviews for The Spirit Called Rail Tracer|
| Gnos fo Ytinrete chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
I don't know about that last line but very nicely done overall.
| Emil Lime chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I was looking through older fanfics for Baccano! since there aren't that many new ones...This was quite clever, I must say. It must have taken forever to get all of the rhyme right. There's quite a bit of slant rhyme (which we just got done talking about in my Creative Writing class...so it's always a coincidence, ja?) Either way, just wanted to say it was very enjoyable to read, even though its the beginning of summer! XD
| Lord Rebecca-sama chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
hahahaha i loved it! so very good. _
| Silent Sacrifice chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
This is wonderful!
I LOVE IT!
| unsungxstar chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Too funny for words my friend, too funny for words
| Tchabita A chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
The first verse I read... And I was thinking like : "This is SO gonna be awesome! SO worth my time!" Nice... I LOVE this! :)
Yah... That makes sense... What exactly IS a pussyfoot? And does it REALLY fly? Hmm... xD
Is this in JACUZZI's point of view? Or is this in an OTHER character's point of view?
Vino... I prefer calling him Vino... He does as well... Claire sounds WAY TOO girly and I sometimes think of Rachel when I see the name "Claire" ... It's an honest mistake, okay? I was mislead by my friends that "Rachel"'s "Claire" ... I'm still sort of confused up to now... Vino Claire Stanfield never had any ash nor soot on his clothes! Only blood! I'm not sure if the added soot and ash would make him more scarier... People would probably underestimate him and call him a chimney sweep and that he fell from the chimney thus the blood... :) But... His maniacal smile makes sure that EVERYONE, and I mean EVERYONE, gets scared of him! :)
But I do love his personality! And I TOTALLY dig his look! :) Even as Rail Tracer! :)
Good work! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS! Man, you're good! :)
I'll be SURE to read them! ;)
| sweetpeatea chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
eh it was ok as a peom. it had no rythm to it. im fine with no rhymes but i need something for me to follow.
well thats all byebye
| Mental Verin chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
lawl! that's epic
| NeptunesBlue chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
this was amazing. so creative, and how funny of me to stumble upon it 5 days before christmas?
| Lord Divestre Croft chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
Using "The Night Before Christmas" as a base for the poem. What a way to show off maniacal glee.
| yukidaru chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
awa quite a detailed poem about claire and ladd.