Reviews for My Fearless Bella
Guest chapter 18 . 3/23
One tree hill! Loved that part
Bell 1 chapter 48 . 6/9/2014
This was a sweet and fun story.

I must say, I do feel sorry for Charlie. He was actually trying to make amends, but Bella was so cold and unforgiving. I feel this way because, first, it didn't seem like the Bella we have all come to know and love, even in this story. :( Second, we didn't really get to know the Charlie of this story, so to hear what he is like, mostly from this chapter, it was difficult to grasp Bella's anger or resentment of her father. It mostly felt like it was thrown in there, which didn't allow the connection, or understanding about Bella's displeasure towards her father.

As much as I enjoyed the story, there were many discrepancies that bothered me. Not enough to stop reading, but enough to warrant a mention. It was also a little difficult to read due to things a beta could have helped clean up. Other than those...

Thank you so much for sharing this cute and enjoyable storyline. :D
Claudine chapter 27 . 6/9/2014
Its so sad o and when is tHe baby commin
Liz 1974 chapter 49 . 6/14/2013
great story I loved it
Liz 1974 chapter 45 . 6/13/2013
I normally don't review until I am done w/ the story I just wanted u to know that all the medical terms for this chapter is dead on I have a son & some of what happened to Bella happened to me I didn't have preeclampsia but, I was close to having it happy to tell u that we r both fine & he is a spitty 13 yr old now
Liz 1974 chapter 35 . 6/13/2013
its fine but, if u really need to know it is DALE LOL
JackSkellington'sBride chapter 49 . 6/3/2013
Hey I'm 950 YAY I love the story it's so sweet
babygirl2928259 chapter 48 . 3/15/2013
sad to see the story end cant wait to start reading the sequal... loved it
babygirl2928259 chapter 47 . 3/15/2013
yay they finally got married... love it
babygirl2928259 chapter 46 . 3/15/2013
love it love it love it
babygirl2928259 chapter 45 . 3/15/2013
i have to agree with alice it was the best way for emmett to tell and prove that he loved bella more then anything... love the story
babygirl2928259 chapter 44 . 3/15/2013
omg! love the story... great chapter
babygirl2928259 chapter 43 . 3/15/2013
poor bella this is not good...
babygirl2928259 chapter 42 . 3/15/2013
this cant be good emmett and jacob going to see charlie and kick his ass? somebody is going to jail... love the story
babygirl2928259 chapter 41 . 3/15/2013
poor bella... what the hell is wrong with charlie? bella is going into labor... love the story
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