|Reviews for Searching for the Stars|
| Mockingjay33 chapter 4 . 3/2/2013
Can't u spell private it's spelt like this , private, not , privet
| twilight37 chapter 2 . 6/19/2012
I felt the need to review because you put Taylor Swift in this chapter! I love my Taylor. (: Great so far!
| LAtwilight01 chapter 15 . 9/28/2011
| Edward's spouse chapter 15 . 6/14/2011
excellent. cannot wait for more.
| Butterflies-LastForever chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
| twilighter123 chapter 4 . 5/12/2010
I have a few suggestions:
1) You have numerous typos such as (quite - quiet and privet - private) just make sure you correct that.
2) I think you should make a more sensible motive and explanation for Bella's actions. Even though it is chapter 4 I truthfully don't know why Bella hates Edward so much. Edward's personality in this story doesn't reflect the heartbreaking, player you want him to be. He comes off as a nice and sweet guy just trying to get Bella's attention.
3) Don't include song lyrics in every chapter. It cuts back from the story, instead of complimenting it.
Otherwise, great plot moves. Just make them a bit more detailed.
| Dayan17 chapter 15 . 4/6/2010
Write more PLZ!
| revivetheworld chapter 15 . 2/2/2010
aw i can't wait to read the next chapter
who is telling who that they are in love first do you reckon you could tell me? ( insert cute puppy dog eyes here )
LOVE your stories btw
| Ms. Kaylea chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Great story! I love it!
| Ribeana Girl chapter 15 . 11/29/2009
| Debussy's Melody chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
I love it already! :)Cant wait to read so more.
| kierraayanna chapter 15 . 10/12/2009
| futureculleness chapter 15 . 10/6/2009
hey i love this story! it's so cute! :D please update soon!
| RosesFromDrew chapter 15 . 8/13/2009
edward, if bella doesnt like u then i dont think finding the girl from the ball will help! do u want a little clue 2 help u guess y? the girl has long brown hair and so does BELLA, the girl has the same brown eyes as BELLA and the girl (as u probably discovered) is a klutz like BELLA! luv ur story! it rox!
| Steffie-x3 chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
I really like your story.
you're a great writer!
it is just soo cute,
you've already waited to long with the next chapter,
do you want to make me cry? ;-)
pls write on!