Reviews for Tin Man |
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Anthea Triton chapter 1 . 3/8/2012 Oh. My. God. That was friggin awesome! Epic! Fantastic! Splendid! Brilliant! AMAZING! And beautiful too XD No, seriously. This was really, really good! I live how you displayed both Uzura and Edel. And how, Edel came to realize thy perhaps she DID have a heart. It was just so... WOW. Keep writing! ~Anthea Triton~ |
Chu-Chu chapter 1 . 12/9/2010 Lunasphere is the only other one to review this so far. And this is a great piece of writing, too, so I can't figure out why that is. Aside from that, this story causes adorable images to spin in my head of Uzura and Miss Edel sitting and talking together within Drosselmeyer's random dimention-in-a-clock, which clearly has another dimention inside of it in which Miss Edel resides. I'm gonna make fan-art about this story and then I'm gonna start wishing I had a deviantart page. Oh well. Maybe I could put it up on the princess tutu facebook fan-club page and include a link to this. I'll try that if the pic looks good. And if I can draw Miss Edel! I don't get to draw her enough, so I gonna try harder! Oh, now I sound like Duck. XD Great job on the story! oh and could editing make this better? I think it's marvelous as-is.(and now the review is more-than-likely longer than the story, Uh-oh!) |
LunaSphere chapter 1 . 2/12/2009 This was lovely and charming and haunting. You captured Uzura's voice and character so completely from the first line. I really liked the idea of a conversation between Uzura and Edel-I always did wish the two of them could meet. My two favorite lines in this: “Gaps between dimensions have different laws,” and “Perhaps another tin man has been her own wizard.” Those were just, wow. The suggestion that this could be even better if you revised as you mention in the author's note makes me wish you would. |