|Reviews for Fellow Artists|
| Biblio388 chapter 14 . 2/18
A bit rushed like you said but it was still very interesting. I can only hope that this story gets continued at some point in the future. Preferably after Seeker of Darkness gets updated because that story is just awesomely good.
| Biblio388 chapter 13 . 2/18
Awesome interactions this chapter. Had to laugh at Naruto's solution to the wall.
| Biblio388 chapter 9 . 2/18
Like the interactions with their sensei. Definitely made me laugh to see.
| Biblio388 chapter 8 . 2/18
Good fight with Itachi. Don't know why more people don't try something similar because Yakumo is a monster in her chosen field. Good story so far and looking forward to reading more.
| Biblio388 chapter 1 . 2/18
Like what you did with this. She never really gets explored as a character and it seems like such a waste of potential. Hoping to read more of this.
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/15/2014
i was rereading this and i saw your comment on what jariya teaches him on the training trip and relised that everything jariya tought him in canon, with the exception on the rasangan, were techniques to increase his already high raw power and hardly anything else, so jariya turned naruto into a power house with a very narrow arsenal of only 2 maybe 4 techniques total
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/15/2014
this is the best dark naruto and the only good and has any real length naruto/yakumo fanfiction i don't why there aren't more with this you have similar pain share with them like the more common naruto/fellow jinchiki ones without having to arrange naruto leaving the village to find them but i do would like to see a light or grey naruto version of this because dark narutos tend to only be novelties to be enjoyed for a few chapters then find something not as eternaly angery. a device you could use is keep the first chapter and have donzo keep the civilian council off naruto's back because donzo being the war halk he is will see their kids as powerful new weapons that might have the kuruma family bloodline of real illusions thanks to the kubis influence might strengthen it to were it will show more often then once every 10 generations. just a thought from a guy who can make concepts but can't write a good story to save his life
| Fearling001 chapter 14 . 9/28/2014
| Tsukoblue chapter 14 . 8/14/2014
This is a great story with lots of potential but it's been dead for over three years... oh well...
| simeon234 chapter 14 . 7/26/2014
| qwettot chapter 14 . 11/8/2013
dude,this story is amazing but short
keep update dude i'm waithing for next chapt.
| Leez chapter 14 . 10/14/2013
Are you planning on EVER continuing this fic? It's a great fic and a fantastic read, and truthfully I really hope that you'll get around to it one day. Great work. It's just as enjoyable as Majin Naruto too in some respects. And even better in others. (Although definitely not all :P).
Anyway, hoping for the best,
| fiddys chapter 14 . 9/26/2013
You die? (good job)
| xSilentSakurax chapter 14 . 9/8/2013
this was awesome, I look forward to reading more :)
| rasengan770 chapter 14 . 7/26/2013
You should continue and you should make hinata & yakumo pregnant LOL by Naruto of course...& gud story keep it up like I say LOL