|Reviews for After the Dawn|
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/8/2014
I cried! Haha it's a good story xxxxx
| BELAVERA chapter 3 . 7/21/2013
It was quite clever, and I'm glad that Edward still protected her from Tanya. Will was the only one who truly believed in his Gran, though.
| BELAVERA chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
If Edward stops to think rationally, he will know something is up. He'll remember
Alice from last time, he will remember that Bella would not let him in her mind last night, and he will remember that she wanted to do the opposite of what the Volturi wanted. When he said he couldn't do it, she decided that she could.
| palmtreehead chapter 3 . 4/23/2012
I agree that of course the Volturi would be back again in the future, so I liked this wrap-up. However, I didn't find the explanation of how Bella fooled Alice believable - to me it doesn't matter what random decisions she makes along the way if she knows all along that she'll betray the Volturi. I thought you'd go with Bella's gift developing to the point where she could fool Alice, by projecting false decisions maybe. Or maybe I'm silly and that's what you meant... Anyway, it was really well written, I quite like William; and the characterisation was spot on. Thanks for sharing!
| Brit Geek chapter 3 . 10/2/2011
Beautiful, short and perfect. Well written, perfectly executed (and not just the Volturi, lol!) A wondeful story. Thank you, very original and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Time well spent! :-)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Why can't u update come on!
| SareRide9 chapter 3 . 5/9/2010
Great story, I loved it. I knew Bella wouldn't do that. :p
| Goddess-Divine-05 chapter 3 . 11/27/2009
w00t! go Bella! Hear ye, hear ye! The new "royal" vampire family is the Cullens/Denalis! W00TNESS! lol
| HyperPixiexoxo chapter 3 . 10/28/2009
SERIOUSLY, WHEN DID BELLA GET SO GOOD AT ACTING? AND WTH WITH THE WHOLE PLAN? OMG! I ACTUALLY BELIEVED SHE WOULD KILL HER OWN FAMILY, IM SO STUPID!
| changingitup chapter 3 . 8/10/2009
loved it. brilliant plot!
| VampWitchCat chapter 3 . 5/23/2009
That was so awesome! I loved it! You are a very good author!
| Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 3 . 4/25/2009
| Twilighter chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
Wow this was an amazing fanfic. I thought bella was actually going to betray them then it made so much sense in the end! You are a very good writer!
| Alice Cullen 1534 chapter 3 . 4/8/2009
| Beuatiful-Bell123 chapter 3 . 3/19/2009
oh my gosh. u are brilliant. this was awesome