Going for a rereading of this masterpiece.

Happy to read this again. It was one of the first fanfics i found after reading Twilight & wanting more. Bravo!

Whew!

Of course weakling Bella will try to save Alice herself - with Jacob.

They're on to something...

Quite clueless.

Damn. That would suck.

I was expecting him to say “Mate”.

So far, as far as I’m aware, she’s cried like a child and complained about taking care of the household when that’s her Job!

A brilliant twist on our favorite family!
Loved this

He had to
He will have to
Finally
Grow up
T

Poor saint Edward
He’s in for it now
R

When you ask in ALL. SHOUTY CAPS (Thanks sqid.) how can I refuse. I wonder if she left him a message in her daily report that she didn’t wear anything scented
Hmmm
R

*standa to applaud*

I just love this version of Edward. It fits with the canon idea of a person frozen in stone and takes it to another level, and it feels so right.

I really like the idea of Edward growing up and moving away, especially since he was so young when he was changed. It's like, for all the others, forming a big family was like settling down, but for him, since he was too young to have left home, it's like still being stuck at home. And I can only imagine how lonely it would be as the 7th wheel in a house of loving couples.

This was a beautiful lemon, and not just there for its own sake, but import to character growth, which a really appreciate. I also love how Bella is more mature and has more self respect and autonomy.