Your a great writer, but I found myself confused and unable to really latch on the story.

Edward giving her the key to the trunk is his version of “can you please stay forever?”
Sweet

Aww Edward, our favorite emotionally-stunted vampire

Awesome to reread this again! And you should totally get a new banner one with Rob in his Batman costume. j/s

At this point in the story, after Bella can't reach Edward, she just gives up and looks to Jacob for what to do...I wondered why Bella didn't try one of the other Cullen's phone and tell them what they found out?

This is the third read for me and since this chapter has not been reviewed I just have to make note of the Batman irony from the past few chapters .I'm sure everyone reading this now will comment about Rob being Batman and the irony of the comic book superhero discussion in these two chapters. Batman for the win! I think Rob, being our visual Edward and all, will rock the part of Batman and I can't wait for next year when that movie comes out. It's like Batman was meant for Rob and that chiseled chin of his and your Edward in this chapter.
This story is so filled with great story plot, action and of course the slow burn romance we all love. Thank you for keeping it here for us to read and reread.

I best part of Twilight was that Edward was a virgin. You ruined that fact in this story.

You completly ruined this story by making Edward have a relationship and sex with Tanya. Shame on you for ruining the Twilight canon.

Great chapter. Im loving this story.

Wow. This Edward is so intriguing . Great chapter.

Love this!

My goodness. I absolutely love this Edward! Gaaaah!

:) :)

Looooooooveeeeee it! No words, this is an incredible story!

I’m so intrigued!