Reviews for Creature of Habit
pippapear chapter 8 . 1/29/2009

I think this chapter was the best yet. Complex and conflicting...

I love his slow but eventual realisation... He really was kidding himself subconsciously prior - & of course this is all so new to him...

Bless him.

& Bella - no idea how close to the edge of the pits of hell she teetered...


(is it wrong that I was hoping that Bella was dreaming of Edward?)

I imagine he will be back...

Oh & thank lordy for Alice and those visions... I imagine Edward will have some sort of gift to thank her!

Thanks again - great chapter.


BaconButt chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
Edward saves the day!... erm night (lame I know).

Only Edward can pull an OCD, emo, stalker-creeper and can easily get away with it.

Awesome chapter, as always!
Kate chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
I am really enjoying your story. I can't wait to see where you take these characters!
Debussy-This chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
You know Stalkerward is my favorite thing. Second only to leg hitch.

Why is him sniffing her shirts such a turn on? That's just..

there's something wrong with me.

Amazing, as was expected.
barbarito chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
Angel! That was fantastic! I was so scared for Bella! Love the interaction between Bella and Edward. how sincere he was with her and how he now has to protect her from crazy james and victoria! Love that he had to go into her apartment to make sure she was ok and realized just how much he desired her! AWESOME job!
aj79k40 chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
Great chapter...I love the suspense.
fanficaddict6604 chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
love, love, love this story! Please update soon!
Pastiche Pen chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
Okay. So I love the action sequence between Victoria and Bella-all kinds of awesomeness, and then the scene with Edward going into her apt... PERFECT.

I love his vampy possessiveness. Mine.

It's ridiculously hot.
Fear Cuts Deeper Than Swords chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
Oh my God! That was amazing. I loved when Edward read Angelas thoughts about him! I can't wait for an update! This is one of my favorite stories. I'm kind of bummed that Jasper isn't in this chapter. Oh well it was stil excellent. I'm so excited to see what happens next! Update soon!
kellilly chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
i absolutly love this story! keep up the great work!
vamosrafa07 chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
awesome. magical.
stavanger1 chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
I liked it. Although, why he sent her away instead of just killing her is perplexing. Great job though!
MerpTheMerp chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
... That must be awkward for him. Haha He deserves it after her week.

Gosh I love Bella. The way she destroyed his shirt (and I've said this before I believe) was priceless.
ellalive chapter 7 . 1/29/2009
I really like this story! I'm glad that you actually have a plot going outside of the Bella/Edward romance. Obviously, that's the best part of all stories but so many authors make the mistake of not having an actual plot and then they have nowhere to go when Eddie and Bells actually DO get together. I can tell this story is not going to be like that. I like your characterization of Edward. It's definitely different from the Twilight Edward, but still quite similar. Your writing gets better with every chapter. You've made Bella a very likeable protagonist and her quirks are fun to read. I eat peanut butter straight from the jar, too! Hehe, it made me laugh when I read that. Keep up the great work. Please update soon!

NEVERMORE DARKNESS chapter 7 . 1/29/2009
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