Reviews for Creature of Habit
wtvoc chapter 5 . 1/24/2009
oh, edward. vigilantes. hm
Thallium81 chapter 5 . 1/24/2009
okay. i was thinking maybe the box was full of headless corpses or something.

not really.

dude, i love your descriptions of the thoughts flitting through edward's head while he was out. not just the random thoughts or other people, but also his own thoughts. you've done it so well.

so, edward is stupid enough to try to take on three evildoers on his own? what the hell? does he have a deathwish?

what happens when the badguys eat bella? huh? what will edward do all by himself then?

i'm enjoying your style and the mystery.

wtvoc chapter 4 . 1/24/2009
thump thump thump

mine mine mine

love it.
Thallium81 chapter 4 . 1/24/2009
holy hell. is she gonna cut herself?


man oh man. edward is IN FOR IT.


love this. thank you for writing it.

Thallium81 chapter 3 . 1/24/2009
lordy. edward loves to torture himself.

what kind of intervention? was it a you-shouldn't-eat-people intervention, or was it a you-isolate-yourself-too-fucking-much intervention?

curious readers will continue in orer to find out.

Thallium81 chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
i must know if he is eating peple. or maybe kittens.

seriously. your writing is refreshing. i've started (and then promptly stopped) so may fics lately. your speling and grammar and details are erasing all the pent-up anger i've been collecting from the bad writing.

and extra points for spelling pique correctly. it's my biggest current peeve.

Thallium81 chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
i am so intrigued and excited.

i haven't found an exciting-looking vampfic in a WHILE. i can't remember who recommended this one to me today, but i am thrilled so far.

Samtastic Sami chapter 6 . 1/23/2009
haha! i like

continue please

update soon
rerose1975 chapter 4 . 1/23/2009
Why is it SO hot when he thinks "mine"? That one word gets me every time!

Great story, it's something I haven't seen before and I'm intrigued.
YazPistachio19 chapter 6 . 1/23/2009
Loving the story, OCDward is yummy. Can't wait for more!
Pastiche Pen chapter 6 . 1/23/2009
What's not to like about lusty Edward...?

And this line:

"I was resisting the urge to take all of the notes, write ‘I Quit’ in color coordinated Sharpies and stick them all over the house in a fit of rage."

Made me LMAO.

I love bitter humor.
Pastiche Pen chapter 5 . 1/23/2009
Mwahahaha. Dangerous vampires.

Eddy's makin' enemies isn't he?

And that's going to be bad for Bella.
Pastiche Pen chapter 4 . 1/23/2009
"Trying to capture her scent.


So animalistic. And so well charactized.

I luved it.
Pastiche Pen chapter 3 . 1/23/2009
Okay, the physical descriptions of her presence are wonderful, as well as Bella's girl chat with Angela.

Pastiche Pen chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
"Edward Cullen loved a challenge."

That's sorta one of the most ridiculously hot lines of internal Edward monologue I have ever read.

And I'm not even sure why.
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