Reviews for Creature of Habit
13jakeluver13 chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
This tory is so intriguing and cute! i can't wait to read the next chapter!
Twilightlvr1 chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
This just gets more and more intriguing! So he ripped out the intercom system? Good grief! Interesting that he's getting possesive already. Liked the analogy about the dogs fighting over their dinner. And I had to laugh that Bella said Edward Cullen and fuck himself and that he saw that. That would be my luck to say that and have my boss see it! Another good chapter- can't wait to read more!
barbarito chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
HOLY HELL! That was brilliant! I love this so much! Love how he was watching her on the monitors!DIED when he rushed down to "mark" bella as his! Please update again soon! I cannot wait to see how Edward composes himself after he scared the shit out of her!
AngstGoddess003 chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
"Ms. Swan turned, walking back inside, and her hair flipped just slightly, and Tyler moved towards her and sniffed the air.

Trying to capture her scent.


Like an animal marking his territory I leapt from my seat and reached the door in an instant.

I closed my mouth before entering the hallway and although I was not assaulted with her scent I could feel her in my bones.

thump thump thump thump thump

mine mine mine mine mine"

Yeah, this totes did me in BB. He is caveward all the way, but not sexually. It's so Discovery Channel, but instead of the mating dance most authors would have Edward doing by this point, it's a territorial meal thing. Which is just so damn perfect... and really... a little... UNG.

Right on. You conveyed him perfectly. And I know I've already totes doted over this to you in chat, but I'm doing it again.

And... I like how you conveyed Tyler and Eric. Most authors (myself included) when they bring in another interested male, he is crudely vying for Bella's affections. But these dudes aren't crude at all. IDK why, but I like it. It's refreshing to just have Tyler politely and covertly interested, instead of grabby and rude.

And as you already know, I adore the little side-mention of Jasper helping Edward with his electronics.

So... much love, keep on keepin on, and I'm always here to volunteer if you need glorious caveward feedback.

Gasaway Alley chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
thump thump thump thump thump

mine mine mine mine mine

Love that! Everyone is so right about this story! Very unique and very will written. Can't wait for more.
Gasaway Alley chapter 3 . 1/13/2009
Ok, LOVED it! I loved your term...She had marked my home yet I couldn’t penetrate Sorry, my mind goes darkly dirty sometimes!
limona chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
Your Edward is fascinating. I like the way you're portraying him as interested in her blood and her scent, but as oblivious to the rest of her.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)
lovelyinherbones chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
Agh, god. This fic is so fascinating and wonderful and original. Really, one of my favorites. It's got excellent, distinct characterization (of both Edward and Bella). Like, your characters don't do anything extremely out of character or ridiculous, and their respective narrations are wonderful and eloquent and...appropriate, for lack of a better word. And the plot - so unique!

But the chapters are so short! They leave me dying for more! Please update soon!
geosgirl chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
Edward holed up in an upstairs room, watching the play by play on the super security system had me giggling to myself at work today. I'm sure people were looking at me funny. Him thinking her hostility was unnecessary was just too funny. Of course, he would think himself above reproach...LOL.

Man, he got territorial so quick even his vampire head didn't have time to spin! That's great! He is a little stick-up-his-buttish, but I can't wait for Bella to liven him up a bit. It gives a nice lightness to the story.

I can't wait to see what kind of business they are in, where they have to worry about retaliation...
hotandcold chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
I love the "mine" - that kind of thing gets me every time. It's so EFC of him. But I like that he is unsure where Bella is concerned. I like the mix of perfect, assured, arrogant Edward with unsure, socially awkward Edward.

I like that Bella isn't immediately all in love with him, though she knows he's handsome.
byhelenahandbasket chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
Ms. Swan turned, walking back inside, and her hair flipped just slightly, and Tyler moved towards her and sniffed the air.

Trying to capture her scent.


Like an animal marking his territory I leapt from my seat and reached the door in an instant.

Oh yeah. Can't say often enough how much I love the bloodlust/sex lust connection and confusion. Yummy.
hot 101 chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
So wow, uhh...Edward's not vampire?.Are you sure about that? LOL:).No seriously, I really like this story!.Its very...captivating!.I like how you can write Edward's POV and not give everything his POV brings out more questions LOL.I can't wait to read what happens next!.Update soon please.
Spunk-Ransom-me chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
Thanks for the update. I'm loving this story so far. Your characterizations are spot on! Hope to read more soon.
jdsk chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
Caveward strikes. MINE. Loves.

Saved by Alice no doubt. Whew! Close one. :)
bookworm-nz chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
Ah Edward you've got it BAD! He's not in love with Bella yet (but then again neither was Edward in the books) but the obsession is in full just kills him that he doesn't know what she is thinking. I was laughing at how adorably clueless he is as to Bella and her "unnecessary hostility" oh darling stalkward you have SO much to learn...

I loved the change from his rational "And if it didn’t work I would let her go and find a new assistant" to the instinctive, animalistic "mine mine mine mine mine".

Is possessive Edward hot or what?

And of course more clues as to what Edward is up to - but I can't process those at the moment I'm being distracted by my lust for possessive stalkward...

Thanks for the update, it was another great chapter :)
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