Reviews for Problems with the Porsche
DoodleMeNow chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
so, so... Alice.D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Awsome story!
Its one of my favourites!
Keep writing, you have a real talent.
Well done,
Alice xxxx
Merina Thropp chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
aw so cute!
illereyn chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
lol! Bella is pretty superficial here, but it's funny.
AprilBaby30 chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Aww, loved it. :D
Brokenharted chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
so fitting for the story...
TheSingingGirl chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
I did like this... but I thought it ended a bit abruptly. You could have padded out the second half a lot more. I think adding the "details" that Alice was originally after would uplift the story, but wouldn't spoil the mood, because it would just give Bella's realisation a far more positive feel to it.

Just an opinion. Feel free to ignore it. I probably would.

readtoday chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
I like how you projected Bella's insecurities like that. It shows to me that she's well I already knew, but shows that just because she has a gorgeous boyfriend, husband, fiance, whatever, she still isn't perfect.
TurCha chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Aww I love Jazz and Alice, and for her to talk about their love in such a way is great piece of work, keep it up. :)
fairydustillusion chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
awesome job as usual!

kelsieeee chapter 1 . 1/4/2009

that chapter was really cute.

I liked how you compared alice a jaspers relationship letting bella know that alice sees past all the scars and loves jasper for who he really to make bella see that edward loves for her. both inside and out.

XxlirxX chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
I loved it! So sweet! Now that I read this, it looks like a missing piece from Breaking Dawn or Eclipse. This would fit in nicely.