Such an interesting concept. I loved this outside point of view! So brilliantly thought out, because we do judge people based on what they look like, and how they act! Especially if we only see them in bits and pieces (stores, on the street, in a restaurant etc..) I think you captured that perfectly.

I also enjoyed your OC's character. She was amusing to read about. :)

This... is SO awesome. Try writing it in Kyouko and Tsuruga's POV?

Ok so we have read this little one shot several times now and we have decided that it is REALLY well written. Thanks for posting it. Skip Beat is one of our favorite manga and the story funny and entertaining.

a touching story :)

I remember reading this years ago and i remember searching for it again because it was so good and ive probably re read this so many times, and i have no idea why i havent reviewed.
This fic is amazing in the way its constructed and written and i love the little quirks and moments in a oc centric story, the character could have been more developed, but keeping in mind that the final focus was kyoko and ren, i guess how you did it was perfect, so thank you for this amazing piece
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This is pretty interesting. XD

cute

I very much enjoyed this, it was very funny and amusing!

Really really fun to read~!

Oh, wow! This was just... -so them-!

This was really good. Great idea with the waitress' POV. At first, I was wondering.. 'Am I supposed to know these characters?' LOL you got me

i suspected kyoko n ren being the customers but i think it wasnt clear enough, like hints weren't dropped well. but interesting story. (:

Loved it! Excellent job!

Now I start picturing the waitress just acting completely different every time they come in. Be like, if they wanna act I will too.

This was hilarious! I nearly acted like Yashiro-san when you said "wife"..!