Brilliant! I knew that it was Ren and Kyoko all along, but there were moments when you had me doubting it. It was very interesting and refreshing to see the pair (and their acting) from an outside view. I just love the roles you cast them, too. I would have to say that the "Vamp" and "Geek" roles were my favorites. I would love to see them play these in the manga (although Natsu is a bit of a vamp). Excellent story! Thank you for such a good read!

This was extremely awesome.

I love the eccentricity and mystery surrounding every presented character. Heck, I didn't even know it was them until the last few hints of it.

I especially admire the way you weave the story in an outsider's perspective. I think it takes a lot of time and careful plotting to create something like this.

Thank you for such a brilliant read. :)

Oh, this is just *perfect*. The buildup, with Kyoko-the-chameleon and the game and the reader pretty much knowing from the beginning but discovering it along with her-and Meiko was just lovely. Very well written, and thank you for doing so!

That was brilliant, trying to figure out who they were, the waitress, everything!

What a great one shot, I wish I had read it before, such originality.

Oh, this was absolutely delightful. I had no idea where it was going, but it was brilliant.

Brava!

lol...i continue to read this time and time again because it's so fun to read...and yet my mind always goes back to the 'Meiko wondered if the woman thought she was doing a good job hiding where her hand was.' is this a little piece of perverted i just read? hahaha jkjk anyways wish there were other roles we could hear about...or maybe just about kyoko and ren's thoughts while role playing these characters

Oh my goodness. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! I don't know what else to say. You had me second guessing myself the whole way through to the end. Fantastically done!

great idea! very cute.

Awesome OC based Ren/Kyouko story! Really loved the idea that they'd "cosplay" all these different roles for their own amusement and that the cafe would be in on it. Well imagined and well written.

i love it!

Awesome story. I love the way this quirky view of their relationship comes for an outsider's point of view. Fun story!

This was an interesting one-shot on the pairing, and it's very in-character.

The act seems like something the couple would actually do, to keep their skills in top-notch condition.

Good job.

this story is so sweet i love it

...wow. that was really good. I didn't expect that at all. At first I was thinking to myself "This is nice, but what does it have to do with Skip-Beat..." but argh I should've figured! Anyway, great job, I really enjoyed this. Haha, I think this is the first Kyouko and Ren story that isn't romance...

Man, I loved this. It was so interesting and different! I guessed who they were at the very start, mainly because who else COULD they be? But I just loved how it played out. This has got to be one of the best Skip Beat fanfics I've read yet. I just loved it!