aw...this was really cute..great job! :D

oh my.. very, very nice extremely interesting read throughout

That was really COOL! Great idea and fascinating to watch them played out. You keep thinking the couples are only meant to contrast with Kyouko and Ren when they show up (maybe them being the weirdest of them all) but then you slowly realize they are all them. Well written and added to my favorites.

That was the awsomist thing i ever read ever! - i wish this was something dat u could post up a nother chapter.

This is one of my favorite SB fanfics. It's cool that Ren and Kyoko love acting so much. I also enjoyed the character you created.

Just as I thought...it was Tsuruga and Mogami-san.

wow! that was so good! :D I loved it! you could've seriously take that somewhere but leaving it right there was the perfect ending! I so loved it!

very fun, i can totally see ren and kyouko doing this too once all the drama is worked out and they get together, excellent job

I really liked this a lot. It seems just like something Kyoko and Ren would do too.

that was so sweet~! omg!

WOW...

Nice work!

lol. After getting the hang of the couples thing I knew Kyouko and Ren had to be one of them and most likely the very end but nice portraying Kyouko's acting character it was very good you wouldn't suspect it was her but Ren was given away by his description :P.

I like it. Kyouko was Kyouko at the end.

man I analyse things to weirdly. Escuse me let me slap myself with a dead donkey

Wow

Amazing story, haha I didn't realize that it was them until the very end _

Nicely written. I don't normally like OCs, but I really liked the waitress that you created.

Fantastical job :)

-DemonicHime

That was really funny! Great job!

All the while, I kept on thinking, where the hell is Ren and Kyouko? I really thought that you were contrasting the love love relationship between couples. Hahaha. Like Meiko, I was pleasantly surprised. Great Fic. :D Instant fave!