|Reviews for Raven's Quarry|
| Starlight41 chapter 1 . 11/21/2018
It's 11:38 and I should be sleeping but this fanfic was SO good! I loved how you portrayed the Combaticons in this. I know that the story is more about Hound, but I clicked because of the Combaticons, so that's what I'm commenting on.
How does this story only have 5 reviews? This is amazing! You should have way more than that.
I should probably go to bed.
| Blue Oatmeal chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
This is great read! I love how you explored everyone's character and motivations and how everyone seemed perfectly in-character. I could really feel the atmosphere and the environment in this fic, and the pacing is perfect. The raven character was really intriguing, and I liked how he fit into the story. I've read this multiple times already, and I'm sure I'll return to it again!
| Heart of the Demons chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
This is a "Transformers: Generation 1" story that I had fun with. Although this is primarily a Hound story, you can never have Autobots without Decepticons - thus the Combaticons are a part o' this story, too. The raven character was very well thought out and proved to be a formidable opponent. It's "Transformers" fans like you that are always able to keep the franchise going through all sorts of stuff, including fan fiction. :)
| JC chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I really enjoyed this! Thank you. The characterizations were spot on. The details in the story really helped me visualize "being there" in the forest as events happened.
| The Guardian Raven chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Ha ha! I finally found it! I saw your artwork for this on deviant art, so I decided to go looking for the story you mentioned. I am so happy you included Raven in your fic :D Yes, I know who he is. I was born on the West Coast of Canada, so I definitely know about him and the stories about him and the others. And of course, the aboriginal artwork fascinates me. I love it.
Very well written by the way. Though might I suggest that maybe you should split into another chapter? It's really hard to find your place again if you can't read it all the way through in one sitting D:
| SneekyKelepir chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
I had added this story to my favorites a while back; I didn't have time to read all of it, but I didn't want to lose this story in the mass of Transfiction. I'm glad I did because this... this is excellent!
I'm a big fan of the Combaticons, especailly Onslaught and Vortex, and Hound, and I loved how you went into depth and detail about their character but stayed true to their original. Also I love the touch of adding the trickster raven, I have a book on a collection of raven stories, so I really enjoyed how you crossed the two together.
The plot was very enjoyable, action, suspense, humor, and tricks all tied together had me on the edge of my seat. In a way it reminded me of the short story "Most Dangerous Game". Nice details on the scenery too, reminded me when I was in Jasper and Banff, Canada running around the glaciers and forest.
Again, wonderful, I greatly enjoyed it, especailly when Brawl got attacked by bears after he killed a bear, revenge of the bears. However, I would make one sujeston, I would post this in separate chapters because the page is very long and it's very easy to lose one's place.