Reviews for New Friends and New Enemies
DieRedPineapple chapter 4 . 1/13/2014
I like the story so far and actually enjoy that your OC Jordan has to do something with Gabriel. Think his circle of influence is wide spread. But I'm really disappointed that Rick comes out so cowardish. Who kisses the love of his life on the forehead for an good night? A little more passion would do him good. No wonder there is a lack of relationship with Melinda. I get that he won't pressure her but he could need a little more self-esteem. Jim is dead now what - over a year? Guess Rick isn't getting any younger himself, with Gabriel around and his proximity to Melinda and Grandview he could be very fast on the top-ranking of the hit-list himself. Melinda should realize that too by now and start to act on it. Every day could be their last, they should relish every day they get. .. hmm rambling again but had to get it out. Hope you continue this story sometime in the near future.
Skylar Owens chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
Love it! Please update soon!
JackSam chapter 4 . 2/20/2010
gOOD FIC. Add more soon.
blue talith chapter 4 . 1/2/2010
Will Rick be saved? Will Jordan? Only the next chapter will let us know!
blue talith chapter 3 . 12/27/2009
Oh, no, Jordan's definitely one of the bad guys!
whiteKnight15 chapter 3 . 12/27/2009
Aw... Why did you make Jordan evil? Cant wait till next sat! 3 it!
whiteKnight15 chapter 2 . 12/21/2009
Love it! Add more soon please!

Is her sister dead?

Why is Gabriel following Jordan and Rick?

Cant wait to find out in the next chapter!
blue talith chapter 2 . 12/21/2009
I'm liking reading this story quite a bit! Just wish, among other things, that Rick and Melinda get together!
xXxKaraBeckerCutterxXx chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Loved it!

Please! Please! Please! Update soon.

I love it. Jordan seems like a great character, she has caught my attention the moment I read your summary. I love Jim/Mel, but i also think Rick/Mel is majory cute.

Well done.

Great chapter

~Kara
whiteKnight15 chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Love it! Please add more soon!
blue talith chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
I feel updates coming! Melinda could definitely use assistance with ghosts. A colleague would be good. And I really like the possibility of Melinda & Rick getting together!
nOtHeReAnYmOrE2222 chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
awesome chapter update soon
BreathlessFaith chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Wonderful start. While I love Jim and Melinda, I've always

thought Melinda and Rick could be a great couple too.

It should be interesting to see how Melinda helps Jordan

accept her gift.

Having Gabriel back in town can't be anything but trouble

just around the corner.

Hope to read more soon.

Thanks for sharing!
angelofmusic1413 chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
I REALLY am liking this story so far!

I love Melinda/Rick relationships, and I like how you are including Eli, Delia and Ned.

Everyone is VERY in character so far, and your spelling and grammar are very good.

I'm looking forward to learning more about Jordon!

Awesome job, please update soon!
SiStAz4EvA chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Great Story!

After reading about Jim's upcoming death, I was really upset, because..well everyone loves Jim right? But then I thought, oh yay! Now she can be with Payne! I was almost sure he was gonna come back.

So thanks for writing this, atleast someone is on the same mindset as me :D

Update Soon Please!
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