|Reviews for Chocolate|
| Zanthraxone chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Well your right that totally sucked... NOT lol
Great story and I love the fact that it goes right along with what would actually happen if both Sam & Freddie grew up a bit in the series so to speak. I have always like the Sam/Freddie pairing and yeah for a guy that's probably sappy but hey I like the two of them together. Great story and I wish you luck in your future stories.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Amazing story keep it up, just watch some of your spelling. Otherwise everything was epic. GO SEDDIE!
| Arcadia chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Somewhat good I'll give you that much, however there are A LOT of grammatical errors.
| Huh chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
It was actually really good. But here's a little tip: Maybe find someone to edit for you?
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
It was awsome
| Plumeria Rose chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
It didn't suck! I thought it was really good!
| Dbzgirl1011 chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
| Bill johngn chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
That totalyy suced i didnt cum liike other ones u gay piiece of fucking shit
| Zucus chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
it did not suck i loved it please add more
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
| miscellaneousmystery chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Awesome job, my friend. Lol. Totally loved it (: an the ending is pretty funny too, ha
| troyella2468 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
I loved it!
| DropDeadMyDear chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
HOW COULD YOU SAY IT SUCK! iit was MIND-BLOWING!
| MiMiH51 chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
| sbenson chapter 1 . 5/3/2011