|Reviews for Good & Evil|
| jk chapter 2 . 9/27
Bella is entirely too needy in this. A boy you just met treats you like crap, bosses you around, and then says that he wants to take you to breakfast then go his separate way...and you actually get in the car with him? go to breakfast? say shit like " I just want to be around you" and "what do you think of me?
I wanted her to just be done with his ass right when he talked about getting food then going their separate ways! Why even bother going to breakfast? Shes just too clingy for me...and SO FAST TOO, she just met him. If he doesn't want to hang out, well...OKAY! GET THE FUCK GONE THEN!
I just feel like she shouldn't have anything invested in him yet, having JUST FUCKING MET.
| Guest chapter 32 . 9/17
I have NEVER read a fanfiction this good! At first I was a bit hesitant and actually stopped reading it but I came back to it a few days ago and just couldn't stop reading! It was incredibly well written, the plot was amazing and the characters so believable that I half believed them to be real! I cannot sing your praises enough and would absolutely adore to read anything else you've written or potentially will write in the future. Absolutely phenomenal! Xxx
| thetwilightmockingjay chapter 32 . 9/13
a truly beautiful story. I really enjoyed it!
| thetwilightmockingjay chapter 25 . 9/13
Gotta say I don't like how she lied to Emmett and took off... But this story is so good I can't stop reading it
| HisLove chapter 32 . 8/10
How have I just now found this story? I've been stuck in a rut for a month. This saved my dismal summer.
| HisLove chapter 27 . 8/10
I love a good story cliffhanger. This is one of the best I've read. Ever.
| jk chapter 25 . 3/7
did she even load them? and seriously...shes not gonna get the fucking drop on a werewolf with a fucking shotgun...a small gun...bullet to the heart would be a surprise though...just sayin
| jk chapter 24 . 3/7
dana should be fired, you don't tell the family of a patient that shes NOT GRIEVING RIGHT. Seriously? what the fuck was that? Stupid bitch.
| jk chapter 16 . 3/7
that seemed like a big what to do over nothing...bella was missing for what? a few hours? and her boo boo on her knee smelled of infection already? even when covered with her clean sweatpants infection magically set in ...in just a few hours? yup totally believable...and it was totally believable that she needed a iv...LOL
seriously you should take another look at this chapter...theres a lot of spelling mistakes too.
| jk chapter 13 . 3/7
is bella EVER NOT in the mood? Honestly Edwards just tanwhores left overs...what the fuck is there to drool about? NOTHING
| jk chapter 12 . 3/6
I don't really get why you don't have bella put some fucking sense in jakes head...she didn't say shit when jake said that jim didn't do anything...IE time for bella to open her stupid pathetic fucking mouth and explain.
| jk chapter 11 . 3/6
why does bella have to constantly BEG Edward to be with her? he just gives his body away to the sperm dumpster...but the woman he loves? he makes her fucking beg for him its fucking sick and pathetic.
| jk chapter 10 . 3/6
I'm confused...he fucked Tanya why? because hes a horny idiot who doesn't mind sticking his dick in cold garbage? LOL...he wanted to know what it felt like to have 2000 other mens cum on his dick?
| jk chapter 8 . 3/6
I feel so betrayed...LOL Edward gave his virginity to tanwhore sperm dumpster denali...and he was with her for DAYS! probably naked the whole time too. fucking disgusting. god you could have picked ANYONE why did it have to be such a used up whore?
| jk chapter 7 . 3/6
its really fucking sad how bella lets Edward use her...he fucks WHORES bella! hes fucking disgusting...I mean come on...any guy that would have so little respect as too try to get sexual with you when theres another couple in the room doesn't deserve you. and to make it even worse Edward knew damn well that lauran was thinking she was with EDWARD.
Your version of Edward is fucking gross.