Reviews for Good & Evil
wardlyman chapter 32 . 4/21
Fucking right on Edward, fuck charlie, take that right to the dick bitch!.

And she won't forget jacob? That'll stop me from adding this to fav. Just wtf, she knew him in her child hood, and he was a complete fuckwit to her and tried to kill edward. That's just bad writing to me right there. Jacob was one of the bad guys in this story.
wardlyman chapter 31 . 4/21
Honestly, kill charlie. His added drama is just annoying cuase he's acting like a child. He doesn't even know what she wants, he hasn't fucking talked and is leaving her. Fuck the dude.

I swear too god, if edward relents, this would just set me off me entirely.
wardlyman chapter 28 . 4/21
She called jacob her friend and confidant when in this story, he was none of that. What type of bullshit like was that?
Silque chapter 9 . 4/19
Holy Christ on a cracker, that chapter was hotter than a chili pepper! I'll be in my bunk.
Guest chapter 32 . 3/3
Great story! Is there ever a chance for a sequel? I just hate letting these characters go.
mygooddog chapter 4 . 1/6
I like your Bella still sweet but has a backbone.
mygooddog chapter 1 . 1/5
love your story so far!
edward1932 chapter 32 . 11/24/2014
I loved reading this story! You are an awesome writer.
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us!
Traditional.Rose chapter 31 . 4/10/2014
I am so beyond in love with this story My favourite fanfic ever. Is there a sequel? Dont DO this to me!
Guest chapter 32 . 10/17/2013
That was amazing. A new great take on their relationship and that world. I really hope there is gonna be a sequel
Gone Into Oblivion chapter 32 . 10/12/2013
I am ready for more, continue please. :)
dbpbatm chapter 32 . 7/7/2013
Interesting take on cannon. Good read. Thank you for sharing this!
Babe Pryor chapter 32 . 5/20/2013
this can't be all! Is there a sequal? Please...I really liked this...xx
Babe Pryor chapter 26 . 5/20/2013
omg I'm freaking out and have to go to work now...omg...xx
jdc0630 chapter 32 . 3/25/2013
Surely a sequel...especially when Charlie finds out Edward changed Bella.

Well, I am going to go check out your possible other stories...who knows, there might be a surprise in there for me.

Hope to hear from you of a sequel...sure would be KILLER !

Thank you for sharing your story with me.

Jamie Crabtree
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