Reviews for Good & Evil
KarshaJo chapter 2 . 6/19/2010
I'm liking this! I also like that it's not written in either Bella's or Edward's point of view. It's different to most stories.
GetMeOffThisCrazyThing chapter 22 . 6/13/2010
Rosabelle chapter 32 . 6/13/2010
yay! It'll be a happy ending. Awesome story!

And btw: Thanx for keeping me up all night.

Rosabelle chapter 31 . 6/13/2010
Yep. Edward and Bella are a destiny equation.

Great work!
Rosabelle chapter 30 . 6/13/2010
Oh boy...
Rosabelle chapter 29 . 6/13/2010 got LOTS of explaining to do...

Rosabelle chapter 28 . 6/13/2010
WHOA. Girl, you are one intense writer. JEEZ! and no, i completely understand. I wouldn't be able to keep writing a scene like that. you have to take a break, it's too much tension. It's like the moment when you're on the edge of your seat and your heart is racing watching a scene like this in a TV show or a movie and then it turns to commercial. lol! that's exactly what it feels like. GREAT JOB.
Rosabelle chapter 27 . 6/13/2010



Rosabelle chapter 26 . 6/13/2010
Hahaha that was so funny for some reallly weird reason. I was just like totally pulled into the story and I had the vision of Charlie changing on the hospital bed with the Cullens looking at him in shock...and then all of a sudden: "wtf edward"

Oh lord! You're great! I love this. AMAZING job. WOW.

...dont leave edward! Wow...I'm getting emotionally dizzy.

...Is this healthy? LOL
Rosabelle chapter 25 . 6/13/2010
OH. MY. GOD. It is THREE-O-CLOCK in the morning and i CANNOT go to sleep because this story is getting so DANG GOOD. ohh bella, ohh edward and ohh emmett is right...I'm getting absolutely NO sleep tonight. I'm blaming my failing math grade on you.

Great work! SERIOUSLY.
Rosabelle chapter 24 . 6/12/2010
uh-oh...what's Bella's plan? Yikes. This is so sad...with Charlie and Renee and everything. It's very grasping though. Great work. Hope E and B get that psycho.
Rosabelle chapter 22 . 6/12/2010
Oh wow. What a great chapter. You kind of bring on a different edge to Edward. The way you ended this chapter is really something that Edward wouldn't do. But, if he had to, he would. BUt he'd find a different way somehow. Nice job, though! suspenseful!
Rosabelle chapter 21 . 6/12/2010
omg awesome chapter. you have a really good writing technique, and i'm not just talking about the lemons! Lol! Great work.
GetMeOffThisCrazyThing chapter 21 . 6/12/2010
GetMeOffThisCrazyThing chapter 20 . 6/12/2010
What's he up to!

That was awesome!
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