Reviews for Good & Evil |
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![]() ![]() I don't like Edward sleeping with Tanya...why did you make him? I prefer canon Edward. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was going great, but, what happen here at the end? I felt you shouldn't have killed off Jake and had Edward so it. Also, it was hard to have Charlie changed by Edward and not see that thru. I thought maybe you felt you backed yourself into a corner with this story, then lost interest and walked away. You certainly change some things and rewrite the last few chapters. It is great writing and a great story. Alot of good hard work you put into this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Phew! That was soooooo hot! |
![]() ![]() What? How can you say the end.? Come on I need to know what happens when Charlie finds out. And for once I want Charlie to find a mate...WTf The end? you are kidding , right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you planing on writing a sequal? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Wow, very intense for sure! Great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Thi is getting exciting! I'm reading on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh Oh, I got a bad feeling... don't do it Edward! Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a scary chapter! What is this crazy guy Jim's deal! Man, what a nut! The cullens to the rescue again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i all ready read this hole story and i absolutely love it i wish you could get these things publishes and stuff not to rush you or anything but plz hurry up and finish torn so you can right some others becoz i have now read all of them an really like torn so far so please hurry up with it so you can right more stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story...I sure bet the party will be interesting. Alice is sooo great! |
![]() ![]() you need to get these published i have now read all of your stories you are truly amazing and i only had one quesstion for you when are you going to finish that one story torn?lots of love |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another good Story! I like it; and I really like Bella's character, and of course Alice! Alice is the best; always! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome, Brilliant, Fantastic, More! Is there a sequel? *runs off to see if there is...* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Charlie will be ok...right? |