|Reviews for Good & Evil|
| jennypoo chapter 3 . 1/15/2009
I loved Anticipation and cant wait to see where this goes! Please update soon :)
| Touchstone67 chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
Excellent, I can't wait to read more and see where this is heading!
| jktwi chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
great story hope u update soon
| oirishgoddess chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
*grins happily* YAYY-YY-YY-YY! Just when you finished one fic...you started another! You have no idea how happy that makes me feel. After Anticipation, I thought, how can she get any better? But somehow (though I'm not sure how on earth you did it) this one promises to be just as good...
And I am so sorry for being so late in reviewing this; the last two weeks have been pretty hectic with exams, and I'm only just starting to go through my inbox now. Sorry about that :) As soon as I saw the third chapter of this new fic of yours in there, I was like 'Come on exams, get a move on and finish up so I can have a life again!'
Fantastic start-love the really deep emotions and the different POVs, from Edward to Bella, and a little of Alice as well. I love how it's pretty much the same story as Twilight, but you've managed to make it so DIFFERENT, too. Like having Edward being forced to tell Bella about him being a vampire, and she not believing him, and how he and Jake already don't like each other, and...well, basically, I love it all, so if I wrote out everything I liked so far, I'd be here for a longg-gg time :D
Brilliant chapter! Really cannot wait to see what happens next...well done! :)
| Best.For.Last chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
Another amazing chapter..xoxo
| mel41g chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
So, is jake a wolf yet?
| Keet1992 chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
haha! great, as always, luna...i am thoroughly enjoying this story...really great stuff...i think there will be a few interesting chapters on their way too, but please, please, please don't hold out on the bella/edward kiss for too much longer...xxxx p.s. sorry i didnt review chapter 2, but my computer was down for a week...but it's all fixed, with a new hard drive and everything...yay...xD lol...anyways...CANT WAIT FOR MORE! xD
| outofmytree chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
I just want to bow down and worship. I adore adore adore this story and am not going to move from my email until I see the next chapter arrive!
| NoizyPop chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
super good stuff
| i will sectumsempra you chapter 3 . 1/13/2009
I've been reading your other story too, Anticipation, and my eyes are glued to the screen. Your writing is so great that it's like I'm reading Twilight all over again :D Your work is amazing, don't stop writing because I've tried to get into other people's stories, and it's just not the same. Update soon, I'm hooked!
| alynawt chapter 3 . 1/13/2009
AHH more more more! ahaha i love this story, i like the direction it is headed in right now. id love to see her torture edward over being just friends, even though edward is too dazzling to do that haha update soon!
| RitaRitaMargarita chapter 3 . 1/13/2009
Phew, I love your big chapters- so much happens! I was surprised at Alice's reaction, wickedly pleased with Edward's inability to stay away from Bella, and absolutely entertained by Edward and Jacob's fight. I'm bouncing in my seat with anticipation over here! Loved it, as always, in case you didn't know.
| RitaRitaMargarita chapter 2 . 1/13/2009
Oh my God, Luna, it appears that you've outdone yourself again. This chapter was maybe the best chapter you've written... ever. I LOVED it... Edward watching the raindrop, grasping her fingers, frantically putting the fire out... It was all just perfection.
| RitaRitaMargarita chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Luna, dahling, I just got back from vacation and all these lovely updates were awaiting me; I just LOVE that.
And I just LOVE this chapter. Honestly, their bond is already so fab. I like the way you set up the characters and the end was very touching. Off to read the rest!
| LskNH chapter 3 . 1/13/2009
Cute! keep it up