Reviews for Good & Evil |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh i really like it...just as good as the last one...keep up the good work hun! |
![]() ![]() Let me just say that I love this story, and I usually don't love these stories. Literally I'm excited and patiently awaiting the chapters to come! I know you have a life, but PLEASE HURRY! Thanks again for even taking the time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting indeed update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow luna! you twisted this story so out of the "norm" so quick... i friggin love it! alice is not all "pro edward & bella", him & jake actually came to blows... he confessed to the vampire thing. d00d... i cant wait to see where you're going with this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the way this is going. Jacob with an uncle about to snap is kind of funny. Great chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() o! interesting!Loved that chapter! so much changed in it! i gotta say Bella took the news well. i cant believe Alice is against them! i hope she still likes Bella a little and i thought that line wiht the rihgty tighty lefty loosy waws hilarious! i first heard it on scrubs, i wounder if that is where everyone else heard it. keep updating ! cant wait for the next! Twerd x |
![]() ![]() ![]() it always kills me to see two people that like eachother like Bella and Edward and the world is against them. I cant wait to see where you take this next. Hurry back! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Bella is So lucky to have 2 men fight for her.. damn i cant even get my bf to take out the trash let alone defend my honor! keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thought the Edward/Jake confrontation was great - and tsk tsk Jacob spilling the tribes secrets just like that! I'm curious as to whether Jake is a wolf yet? As he obviously believes in the legends...or is that because of his crazy (most likely wolfy) uncle? Interesting to see a fic where Bella doesn't believe in the vamps...though I'm pretty sure that won't last long, especially with the upcoming trip to La Push...which I have a very bad feeling about (Ie. I want to yell at her NO Bella DON'T! Lol.) Thanks for sharing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good! I really really need to pee, but I really really wanna read the next chapter.. But if I read too fast, I'll have to wait for the next chapter to come out and I'll be checking my e-mail for an update every five minutes! ...Why do you have to be such a good writer? Maybe one day we should meet up and I could just sit around and listen to you telling me stories related to Twilight. Sound good? |
![]() ![]() ![]() cnt wait for your nxt chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like where this story is going :) keep up the good work, can't wait for you updates |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow... kiss her already! i cant believe he hasnt. argh. irritating beautiful jerk! hes heavenly. *sigh* lol. update soon and kill off jacob black somehow. or atleast dont make bella fall half inlove with him. i hate those stories. but i gess i'll read anyways. UPDATE! lovez xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() holer! good? yes, i like the chapter and the drama. edward is being silly, but when isn't he? great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() More More More! Got to say I agree with Bella, if Edward gave me that ultimatum, I'd take the friends over nothing (and of course hope I could make it something else). Love that he's getting all possessive of her already with Jake. "Don't ever touch her" WO! Angry EdwardHot Edward! :-) Love ya! |