Reviews for Good & Evil
Lizabeth1 chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Well? She says, like she doesn't know she's just hooked us all again!

As always my dear you are amazing! I'm waiting for the next chapter!
CareBehrsGem chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
I love that the tension is already there in the first chapter! Great! I've added it to my favorites. I hope you post soon. I really like how you've written Jasper in the past. I hope we see more of him.
MedievalContessa chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
LOVE it! Can't wait for more! You are so talented, Luna!
Nyddi chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Brava! You win. Hands down. I was convinced you had winned me over in Anticaption. I am utterly and gladly your slave now.

Update soon please.

Wilhelmina Harke chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
The ending of this chapter was perfect!
AndreaRN chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Good start! I liked your last one, and had to follow you here!
jktwi chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
u left it as a cliffy :( excited to c wat happens next hope u update soon
Lily chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
So good! Write more!
Twerd4eva chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
aww! i love this story so far! its so cute with their little chit chat and her with her shyness and her book. i wounder which of the quilliutes( dont know how to spell it) it was in the forest. and if she might see him again. and he might tell her something... well thats just my guess for the future. i'm already really excited about the rest and want more! so please continue this awesome story or you will have a very angry fan! lol! twerd x
Beautifully Tragic chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Luna! I love it! Keep at it, we need more chapters! please!
othfan326 chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
ah amazing start!

the first part of this chapter reminded me a lot of midnight sun. have you read the partial draft of that?

interesting twist with the crazy guy in the woods. it definitely spurs the questions for bella and the protectiveness for edward.

i loved the little bit at the end with the book.

im DYING to read more and see where the bella/edward goes.

please update SOON!
jenellebelle chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
wow...I am so excited...this is gonna be good...

I love the twist of the indian in the woods...and their conversation in the kitchen...

how sweet that she brought him the book..he is gonna be so twisted up about it...I just know that Edward is gonna rub his hand over every page thinking about ther haands touching it too...and maybe smell her on it as sexy...

I CAN't WAIt to read more...hurry up girl!

polyphany chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Like it so far.
addicted2escape chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
so glad you started another story! loving it so far, cant wait for the next chapter
bdawk chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
just wondering will there be any sex scenes
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