enjoyed reading to bad there's not a sequel

I hope that they get their happiness in peace!

I wasn’t expecting that reaction from Charlie!

Oh no!

Oh dear!

Thank goodness they found her. I wonder what they will tell Charlie?

Oh no, this doesn’t look good!

Let’s hope that Sam is a bit more willing to listen than Jake!

Rosalie is as supportive as ever!

They’re both a bit braver than usual!

I’m loving this so far.

great story but it obviously begs for a sequel. bella is an idiot but she's an idiot in canon too so it's not shocking. edward is both arrogant and self-abasing so he's pretty canon as well just lemon flavored. the time line with the wolves and stuff could have been explained better, maybe a oneshot prequel. otherwise it was again a great story.

Bella is entirely too needy in this. A boy you just met treats you like crap, bosses you around, and then says that he wants to take you to breakfast then go his separate way...and you actually get in the car with him? go to breakfast? say shit like " I just want to be around you" and "what do you think of me?

I wanted her to just be done with his ass right when he talked about getting food then going their separate ways! Why even bother going to breakfast? Shes just too clingy for me...and SO FAST TOO, she just met him. If he doesn't want to hang out, well...OKAY! GET THE FUCK GONE THEN!

I just feel like she shouldn't have anything invested in him yet, having JUST FUCKING MET.

I have NEVER read a fanfiction this good! At first I was a bit hesitant and actually stopped reading it but I came back to it a few days ago and just couldn't stop reading! It was incredibly well written, the plot was amazing and the characters so believable that I half believed them to be real! I cannot sing your praises enough and would absolutely adore to read anything else you've written or potentially will write in the future. Absolutely phenomenal! Xxx

a truly beautiful story. I really enjoyed it!